All Comments on 'Noises Through the Wall Pt. 03'

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rawlyrawlsrawlyrawlsover 2 years agoAuthor

Chapters 1 - 10 are complete, including the finale. Chapters will arrive on Literotica about a month apart.

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AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

Pretty good story. But you do a disservice to your readers when you imply that withdrawal is an effective form of contraception. It is not. Pre-ejaculate often contains enough sperm to get the job done. It has sometimes been said that a side effect of withdrawal is pregnancy. It also does not prevent STDs. As long as I am on my soapbox, let me add that it is irresponsible for a writer to include and anal-sex-to-vaginal-sex seen, without washing the dick (or toy) off first. That's likely to lead to a vaginal infection. Just sayin'. But please keep posting. You write well.

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

You really should finish your story. Very stimulating!

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

Fuck yeah! Plow mom's cunt!

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