All Comments on 'Noisy Neighbors'

Please continue with ch. 2

Amazing tension in your scene, love that they didn't resist for too long as well. Just a great read and a great cliffhanger :)

Thanks

Please please please write more!

We too want to put a face to a voice so part 2 is essential for that.

5* BTW!

I want a part 2 to continue the story, but would also like to hear this story retold from the point of view of Bob and Angie from room 254 on the other side of the wall.

Hey thanks for the story. We need some continuation. just got me started. That story can go many places. Keep it up

Jeff

Oh my god, I'm so wet after reading this. I want to be fucked now!

Need more chapters. Cousins talking to each other telling how good it was.

Don't stop more please

Seems they could see each other very well in that dark room.

The story idea was good.

The writing, particularly the spelling, was dreadful!!!

Someone suggested a spell checker but unfortunately you need more than that because some of your problems are with 'homophones' - words that are correctly spelled, sound alike when spoken, but mean very different things.

Example 'creek' and 'creak'! A vigorously exercised bed does NOT 'creek' but 'creak'!

Great story, well written. Yes, bed would creek when you meant creak, but who really cares? (Ask someone to edit/review for you.)

I don't typically like one pagers, but this was a great short story

...was seen on a bar sign:

"Damn that auto-correct! Makes me say thongs I don't nintendo!"