All Comments on 'Nomad Ch. 01'

Damn fine start. Written with enough eplumb to really draw me in. Why does Case have such a hard on for these bikers?? Can wait to find out.

Nice start. Okay, you’ve set the hook, don’t take too long for future chapters.

Good start, looking forward to the next chapter

5/5

Excellent start - if a little short

we need more on Case and his motives;

captivating writing style,

bring on ch.2, waif !

Intriguing, shows a lot of promise. If they're going to be this short please post them close together.

Keep'em coming.

Like the start but FTDS. Too short, way too short.

I just uploaded Ch. 2

Hopefully it will be posted soon.

Interesting. I’m looking forward to more.

Ridiculous that the author reports chapter 2 upload and the story still isn't posted by the moderators.

I guess the holiday weekend and the contest submissions slowed things down. I uploaded it a week ago.

Lovely. Just lovely! Great flow and pacing

Ooh rah