All Comments on 'Nomad Ch. 03'

Still building nicely. I do wish chapters were a tad longer

5/5

I apologize for the short chapters, I also apologize for the length of times between chapters. Even though it takes a matter of hours to get a comment approved it can take as long as 10 days for a chapter to be approved.

That last is not a swipe or a dig at Literotica. I realize I am publishing my work on a free website, and that the website is doing the best that they can.

Damn…already hooked on this one. Look forward to more chapters. Great job so far! From your preface commentary this is based on a historical true story. So far your characters are vivid and grippingly portrayed. Action is realistic.

Well you got me hooked, i am now fearing how you are possibly going to end this in a chapter or two, or else its not done, in which case I will be sad.