All Comments on 'Nora and Richard Begin'

They sound like roommates.

Your characters are useless drains on society

Just another sick cucky story that I didn't bother to waste time on. I see you're pumping out stories left and right, three stories in three days, bravo you, have you noticed though that all three suck and can barely get above a rating of two.

Quit ...... please, go back to work now that the covid scam is over.

just another stupid cuck with a whore for a wife why do you write shit like this belongs in the garbage

Don't pay attention to the anonymity haters..I can guarantee you they haven't written or posted anything.

Keep writing, keep reading, keep improving.

The whore wife wore out her bbc, so now she is going to cuck sweet baby James, apologies to Mr. Taylor, with the mountain man. Another never ending cuck story.

Indeed, beautiful. That is, the writing is excellent even though I do not care much for the subject. Your sentences are beautifully crafted. One minor point: "like" is a preposition, not a conjunction.

Like Nora, l can't wait to tell my wife about Richard

What a stupid dumb ass husband to let his wife fuck around when he's not even there or involved..let alone off to a mountain cabin for a weekend..I have no intentions of reading any more chapters...what a filthy slut whore to even want such a thing without her husband..might as well be single

It's a hot, sexy story, but their cold, matter-of-fact dialogue is borderline clinical. James speaks to her as if she's got an I.Q. of about 14, and she moves, speaks, and acts like she is drugged. This is due to the author's writing style. Too many scenes are a paragraph or two with 99% of the dialogue summarized. Perfect example: the last two paragraphs of the story read like a report, perhaps what you'd read in an intelligence report written by a honeytrap agent to her controller. I thought I'd never encourage an LW author to be more long-winded, but drawing these stories out 3x-5x what they are here would add life, depth, and emotion to them. 3/5