All Comments on 'Nora in the Sun Pt. 01'

The next part of this story is PENDING with the Literotica team, it'll drop over the next couple days! Keep your eyes peeled and don't forget to follow!

Tsa can't strip search and any time you are strip searched a member of the opposite sex can not be present by law.

Great premise and promise for more intimate silence between the two. Bravo.

That is two pages of wasted space.

This was ok. Don't have your characters envision all the things that are going to happen, just have them happen.

@Anonymous

Thank you for the advice - it means a lot that you'd take the time to help me out.

@sp9983

Sorry to disappoint you - I don't know if you're going to like the rest of this story then, it's meant to be a very slow burn with a lot of buildup and tension.

@raraewriter

Thank you so much for the kind compliment!

@Anonymous

I know the TSA can't strip search people - not sure how to get this scene in there without ignoring reality a bit though.

Awesome. Really well written. Thanks

So many mothers and sons are put into similar situations. These are beautiful segues into pure taboo love. Very well written in content and mechanics.

Love this! The voyeuristic views, something he's "not supposed to see".

You might wanna do some kind d of research. TSA isn't allowed to do any of what you say.

That was a lot more than a ‘bit’ of ignoring reality. It made the scene extremely hard to get through. Maybe in its next incarnation think of a completely different scenario.

Do you 'Anonymous' people on here seriously think there are many stories on this website that really do reflect reality for, I don't know, 99% of the worlds population?

It's called fiction for a reason (palm slapping face emogy)

Masterful

ugh I've always hated those a-holes at the North American airports they are worse than the terrorists

hate TSA for a reason

Great writing, but built on a very, very faulty premise.

Very nice. Great beginning though Lord Strange had a 'small' issue suspending his disbelief regarding a TSA strip search. This one knows fiction is fantasy but having served in the TSA for nearly a year the absurdity of the situation broke Lord Strange's immersion in the tale. Still, you did a fantastic job describing the MC and his mother's reactions during their search. This one looks forward to reading more. Thank you, Good Sir!