by northlander
Loved this story and pats previously told story hope your muse finds you soon and you find the time to write more.
Can't wait to read more about the Rogers clan as they move to Canada!
While I have made some negative comments about some of your other stories, this entire tale is lovely. Good characters. Well paced. Some fun plot twists and few emotional surprises as well. My only complaint would be the improbability of it all. But you did it well enough that I only notice it after I stop reading.
It doesn't look good for this to be continued but even there, you let it end at a new beginning. If you had changed the last line from "to be continued' to "and their new adventure began" it would have felt just fine.
Thanks for a wonderful couple days reading.
it has been a few years and no finish to the story. it is well written but leaves you wondering.
A good story very well told. Story elements were believable, characters rich, likeable. Drama was not heavy-handed - quite realistic.
'Hope you keep writing. Alot!