by gen_man69
I liked the story. Too short for character development, e.g. psychologically and emotionally. Likewise relationship between mother and daughter needed to be developed. Finally, the relationship between the two families needed to be developed due to legal reasons.
I was highly engrossed in your story, but somehow felt left high and dry... You should re-write the end, it seems like you rushed the last third. Especially since you have a very original main storyline!
Thanks so much for the comments. Sorry about the delay in the second part. I do this part time, so its quite hard to find the time for the sequel so soon! Will do it this weekend I promise !!
Hope there will be a follow up to this wonderful story. Made my panties damp and want to jill.
Why aren't you telling the other story?????????????????????????????????????????
How dare you write a story like that, having a son and a step mom performing hot oral and manual sex and then stop! Shame, shame, shame!!!
Now that you got our attention with this short story, how about having him fuck his step mom until she can't take anymore.
Good story and I enjoyed the read, thanks
Please don't take too long to release your next chapter. I can't wait to see him do all the 3 gorgeous 'n sexy ladies at the same time on a queen/king size bed! Keep up the good writing. Thank you.