All Comments on 'Not a Bad Gift!'

But you couldn't be bothered with that. Or, was it that you WANTED to force that piss scene on those of us who'd prefer not to read such things? Your story had been a solid '5' in my mind, until that point. Your lack of a caution or warning at the outset of the tale turned it into a '1'. Sorry, but your lack of courtesy pissed me off!

I'm not necessarily into pushing during sex but it's your story and you dont have to warn anyone. You never know what you're going to get so if dont like being surprised i would suggest staying off this site. I liked the story. I give it a 5! Cant wait for them to do more.

reading at piss

Your story was stimulating at the beginning but when you threw in the piss, I stopped reading. I gave you one star solely because I can not give you less

It was a good story until the piss part. Please no

You need to tag piss because that was a nasty surprise. Poor story because of it.

I gave up shortly after "the store was ram-packed", but was glad when I saw by the comments at the end that I'd obviously made the right decision.

(For the record, it's "jam-packed")

I liked the story... piss and all

'For the record' your 'jam packed' may be so in the USA or wherever youre at but here in the Caribben we say 'ram packed' Also for the record all pissed off readers, some people like piss - different folks different strokes - not everybody likes ordinary sex, some of us like kinky, dirty stuff; we experiment. No writer could please every reader. this writer probably writes the story he likes based on his experiences. you want the story you like, hire a personal writer or write it yourself. Live and let live.

This story needs a part 2