All Comments on 'Not a Man Ch. 01'

I absolutely love this story. You build the back story well, and pace it well too. It builds slowly, but not too slowly. I truly can't wait for part 2 of this. Please don't leave it too long! Loved that final scene with him pressed against the wall, whilst Jay slides his length up and down his lower back. So sexual and powerful. So dominant. Hurry up with parts 2 to 40! ;)

Amazing start, you write so well!

A real joy reading this story, please continue.

While I don't want Henry to be destroyed, I love the psychology being played out. I can't wait to see how Jay proceeds and if Tess is ever involved. Keep up the great work and thanks!!!

Loved the tension and the pacing

I enjoyed reading your story "Not a Man". I particularly enjoy stories about "straight" men who get bent over and go gay. I'm double-hard if their sexual humiliation is witnessed by others - spouse, family, friends, coworkers.

You might enjoy one of my stories.

Donald

My stories:https://www.literotica.com/stories/memberpage.php?uid=789392&page=submissions

Well written story. I found it quite arrousing! I can't wait to read chapter two

I wish someone would dominate me like that. I would dress in lingerie and let him do what ever he wanted to me. I would please him in every way. I would become his personal sissy slave!