All Comments on 'Not Again'

Loved it! This has potential for a series if you ever feel the need to tell 'Nique's story. Five stars!

This new literotica sucks.

Having said that, your story was absolutely did not.

I especially loved the not now but wait part as well as overall the humour was great. The FF for me showed nothing but love.

I consider this as one of the best stories on Lit that I have read, down to earth, believable and without the grunting sex. KUDOS to you.

You have the perfect combination: a vivid/tad wicked imagination coupled with an ability to write well. Thoroughly enjoyed this story - entertaining, captivating and wonderfully erotic. 5 stars easy. Looking forward to more tales - thanks for sharing.

Nice story. You have lofty goals when using “Hard Landing” as inspiration. I believe that is the standard for all stories. A few comments: your character development is rushed, and underdeveloped. By rushing, the reader does not have the chance to feel something towards the characters. In Hard Landing, you can see the development and than appreciate the connection between Jo and Blue. Your two main characters lack the spark and interest. I hope you continue to write, it would be a shame if you stopped.

My life partner had both her legs when we met, but used a wheelchair as a result of a drunk mowing her down at age 13 which resulted in many injuries. One leg had been crushed and was amputated aka a couple years after we met due to loss of circulation. We joked that her stump looked like a shark. Several years later she lost her second leg due to a MRSA infection that got into her blood. The MRSA eventually killed her, but we had 16 years together first. It took me awhile, in the beginning, to assure her I loved her despite her scars. She was the most incredible person I ever met and I loved her beyond reason. Two legs, one leg, no legs...didn’t matter. What did was the state of her heart and soul. Thank you for writing a story that takes me back to the love we had, no matter what anyone else thought