All Comments on 'Not all Eyes are Private 02'

our gov. and the way its going now.

any similarities?

This is a good story. It jumps around way too much though. It doesn't flow with understanding how one sentence or paragraph connects to another.

You can write well. Keep it up, editor or not. I wouldn't trust Grammarly...it's infected by the woketard gender theory pronoun virus.

Just silliness, but kinda enjoyable. Thanks.

WTF? Anyone with any military experience knows the beginning is unbelievable in any aspect of story telling

Not completely sure what I read, but what I was able to understand was pretty goog.

Interesting plot, but it wasn’t clear how so many disjointed events and the broad, unexplained cast fit together. The writing was much better than the first of the series.

I don’t know. I liked it. But oh so confusing at times.

WTF?

Errrrr??

Hot mess of a story.

2*

Strange, I think I should of had a few drinks before I read this.

Liked the story (Where are Mac, Dr. Smith, and Chiun?).

Fun with all the pop culture quotes (Tombstone).

Maybe a screenplay or mini series would pull all the plot points together?

Confused but happy, love the ending! Please dear Lord take back our country !!