- Loving Wives
- Not Guilty
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All Comments on 'Not Guilty'
by Harddaysknight
- 807 Comments
Southdownabout 3 hours agoA bit messy and jumbled at times, but well pulled together in the end. You need to be simpler and not try to'jam in' all the information you want to convey at one time This was a fun read but could have been a 5***** epic with a little editing or 'tidying up' Thank You I love twisted plots and interconnecting stories but they have to be clear and well punctuated. take a little time and get a read-through before you publish,,,, Well Done good story!
Anonymous10 days agoHoly moly! Ic69hunter likes a story that doesn’t involve a cum slurping cuckold.
DeanofMean17 days agoSome say life is a bitch, I don't believe that. Life is a sweet one but her stripper name is KARMA bitch. Well done an almost perfect revenge story
cutedaddy6918 days agoNice perspective. You write many great stories and, to my taste, some times an average one. This one is definitely among the kinds where your strength lies! Tx
Imshaken19 days agoLighthearted almost keystone cops and a very clever story! Thank you for sharing your creation!
Gadf7721 days agoThis story progressed and ended differently from what I expected but was fun to read lol. I only wish it lasted a bit longer.
A_Bierceabout 1 month agoI have to read this periodically to offset the absurd doings of the real world (much cheaper than a therapist).
Anonymousabout 1 month ago3rd time I've come across this masterpiece of wit, sarcasm and revenge. 5 stars again!
Buster2Uabout 1 month ago100 Big Blazing Stars for HDK You just can't deny that he is one of the Very Best of the Best Writers on Lit. I mean I laughed and giggled all the way through reading this story. Even though I have read it more than once it is still one of the most fun stories on here. LOL Thank You Kind Sir for all your Effort on Lit. I won't reveal that you are really Clive Cussler when not on here. Thanks, Buster2U
fredbrownabout 2 months agoDeny it all you want but ole Harddaysknight has a delicious sense of humor .......
oldpantythiefabout 2 months agoFast paced and funny, especially the jelly donuts waiting on the cops. The MC got his revenge and a good bit of pussy in process. Loved it.
Grant_Glapsvidhrson2 months agoI think of this story and sweet sweet justice whenever I eat a jelly doughnut.
Anonymous2 months agoMy wife was giving me odd looks as I kept chuckling while reading this story. 5 stars
Anonymous2 months agoA very funny, no, Hilarious tale. Cook knows damn well how the wallet got there! The dialogue was top dhely datire. Well done! Five stars.
JPB
Jetcrash7472 months agoThis story is a classic, haven’t been written over 14 years ago, it’s still appropriate today. An honest man knocking off two prime pieces of pussy in addition to his own wife and convincing the other guy to kill the wrong guy who was seducing his wife.
ViolentKnight3 months agoMy favorite story. It echoes my point that when faces with infidelity, be heartless, not brainless or spineless.
enderlocke773 months agodamn dont remember reading this but it was sweet lol. glad i clicked on the recommend story kinda needed that right about now ty
Anonymous3 months agoSweet! is what I call this delightfully fun tale! Thanks for a well-written, fun read!
Trambak3 months agoRead it so many times. Lost count and each time it’s a five (since more isn’t possible)!
The definition of agreement is apt with the unspoken variety taking the cake err doughnut!
Anonymous3 months agoOne of the very best on here. Funny and well thought out. Good dialogue and plot. This is why I've read your other stories looking for gems like this. BardnotBard
A_Bierce4 months agoI've lost count of how many times I've read this, and still laugh out loud (when no one else is around). Of course I can quote large parts of it, but I still get a kick out of Abbot & Costello's "Who's on First" routine, too. And I've similarly lost track of how many times I've watched "The Princess Bride." I'm a man of simple pleasures and have no qualms about admitting that I indulge them.
Lee20124 months agoFunny as hell!!! Trying to tap dance with Mr Young whilst was lining hus wife up. ⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️
Hask2255 months agoI literally read this back to back twice, it was hilarious, well written and complete without needing to add anything more. Beautifully done!
Anonymous5 months agoOk that was so damn hilarious that I had to read it again and it was just as funny. You have a great sense of humour and I 👏🏼 applaud you!
Anonymous5 months ago5 Stars on a good story . My ex left me for her Soulmate . I was smart enough to let her go . And yes I did tap My ex's girlfriend . I came out way ahead on that deal . Yes i wore a condom as I didn't want to leave any traces of us having sex . She did have sex with my ex's boy friend as payback . She use to laugh wondering if he could smell my cum on her lips .
Anonymous6 months agoA story truly worth 10 stars! Funny as heck and everyone gets what they deserve in the end. I like this author's writing in general but this is a true masterpiece.
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Anonymous7 months agoUltimately fucking fantastic. I have t laughed that hard in years and stacking one laugh on top of the next made it rather difficult to breathe but with that kind of comedy, who needs air.
Anonymous7 months agoTotally hilarious 😂 I'd love to read the conversation after with the MC and his wife I suspect it would be both mind blowing and pants wettingly hilarious. BardnotBard
Anonymous7 months agoThis may be your best story, and that's pretty tough competition. Short and sweet.
gladventurer8 months agoSweet. LMAO. I especially loved the bit about the “unspoken” agreement with the wife. The whole thing was hilarious.
Anonymous8 months agoShould have had him walking out to move in with Mrs. Anderson after dropping the soon to be ex-wife at a mental health facility.
Southdown9 months agoMagic, Hilarious and just a little more than expected. As others remarked the jelly doughnut events were great. As for the Not Guilty -White Album info, as a committed and long time Beatle lover I am almost ashamed to say that I didn't know that. This story was a masterpiece of story-telling, Thank You. Totally 5***** stuff
Anonymous9 months agoNot realistic but certainly entertaining. I hate to admit it, but I liked it. Not my normal reaction to a series of smart alec remarks in dialog. You earned 5 stars for it and for coming up with his unique revenge...can't help but like that part...JZK
Anonymous9 months agoVery entertaining. Gotta love the wifes reaction. He'll probably want her to find another lover with a hot wife so he can have even more fun.
Anonymous10 months ago5 Stars and the moral of this story is to never get between a cop and a box of Donuts .
A_Bierce10 months agoUmpteenth reading, I still laugh out loud at Det. Cook and jelly doughnuts, the MC's wife and jelly doughnuts, the Keystone Kops and jelly doughnuts, the MC's calm and cool demeanor. And jelly doughnuts.
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