All Comments on 'Not Her Type Ch. 02'

So intense! Sums up the perfect sexual fantasy for a woman. Only criticism is that I feel you may have got bored toward the end and wanted to wind the story up quickly; the love declaration was a bit sudden and I feel the characters' emotional relationship was not established quite thoroughly enough to make it believable...

Great work though, sexiest erotica I've ever read :)

I dub thee the knight of hot sex. From now on, use your VLIW and glasses for good. :)

LOVED EVERY FREAKY THRILLING MOMENT OF THIS STORY....!! JST WISH YOU COULD HAVE ADDED AN EQUILOGE ON THESE 2!!! STILL ITS A 5 TOO ME!!! THANKZ 4 THE READ!!!

Best I have ever read here...!!! You are amazing! I see alot of myself in Jasmin... need to find a guy like Mark to keep up with me.... and now ! If I like him enough... I'll have to share your stories with him...

I've read Not Her Type about 5 times. And that is a lot of time considering how long each chapter is. But let me tell you, they are well worth it. I liked how you just mentioned some of their intimate moments rather then showing us. It makes sense because Jasmin is the narrator and she doesn't want it to get personal. No expectations. The progression into their "I love you" was very subtle which showed when Jasmin tells Mark as if she had said it before. Awesome, awesome, great, wonderful, fantastic story.

If only I could find someone with Mark's control...I think my expectations just went up.

I don't think I have ever read a story that makes me horny as hell but makes me go "aww" at the same time. I hope to all the deities that this is not your last submission. Holy crap, if I ever find a man who has as much patience and stamina as Mark does, I would be the happiest woman ever. Words are really not enough to express what a joy this story was to read. And it was well written, too! What more can we ask from an author? Well, another story would be nice actually. Quality, quality, and quality throughout.

Perfect end to a perfect story!!! The "You better be ready for me bastard" scene made me laugh..sexy as hell!!

Well done...

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Gary (Garyandrewsbodyguard@yahoo.com)

that was the hottest story from beginning to end. i hope and pray that one day i am jasmin and i meet my mark!

You brought down the end in a very nice, easy, controlled way, like the last several yards of a wild roller coaster ride. Thank goodness for nerds.

Best story I've ever read! Just absolutely fantastic. ;)

This has to be the best story i have ever read. It blends romance and just plain old fucking in a beautiful way. I like the way you didn't just concentrate on the sex part of the story but made it a typical everyday life kind of story. And the sex scenes are all mind blowing. Thats another thing that shocks me, how can you have so so many sex scenes in one story and have the readers still wanting more. Wow!!! Exhausted from reading this story because my heart beat rate has tripled. Please please please write some more stories and if you decide to write a book, i can even be on the line to get it first as early as midnight!!!

I think the author of this has just described my ideal man.

I am exhausted, just reading all that! In a very good way, of course ;)

So basically, that was amazing.

I wish I had someone to fuck right now

And live out these fantasies with.

Need I say more?

I loved your story and was increasingly drawn in to the non-stop sensuality you created on the screen (page)TY

incredible, please write more!

Excellent and very arousing. Hope you can find time to submit more. Thanx for your contribution to this community.

You are a magnificent writer, this is a wonderful story.

And I think it's great that it's long.

I want a chapter three!

Fuck, just write a book. I'd buy it for sure.

For those of us who like our sex and romance in nearly equal parts, this has got to be the best story on Literotica. It's such a perfect mix, as romantic as it is sexual. A somewhat neurotic heroine, but not to the point she makes you sick. An aggressive, but surprisingly sweet hero. Plot and pace amazing. And for those of you that think it's implausible, you are wrong, but even if you were right, this is FICTION and one of the great things about fiction is everything is plausible. And if after reading this story, the only things you can think to comment on are word choice and grammar, I hope you find a scholarly erotica site that suits your needs. I adore this story! My only wish is that hotknight would consider posting something else.

I loved this story! I read it once, read it twice and could not stop myself from reading it again. It was wildly romantic and very sexy. Mark was an amazing creation, I would gladly get hit by a car to meet someone like him! Captivating story, engaging characters. Great work! Looking forward to more stories from you!!

Wow I could have been Jasmin at one time in my life but my Mark was not to be! This was a great story!

Loved this story

Thankyou so much for your stories. Your amazing and explicit descriptions of Jasmin's feelings throughout led me to initially believe you were female. Once again an amazingly well written erotic journey. BRAVO!! Hope you continue writing.

This is an incredible journey into sensuality and personal discovery as well as emotional healing. There is still more explorations into the emotional aspects to be done, so the story cannot be complete at this point. In addiiton, there has been no mention of Mark's past relationships which might just explain why he was so insistent upon overcoming Jamin's initial voiced limits on their "arrangement". With his confidence level, he surely couldn't have been just a horny dude out to get laid and felt the challenge was the gauntlet being cast before him. He obviously knows his way around the eroticism of a woman's body and mind which would indicate some rather sophisticated experiences. Regardless, there is so much more to explore in their "arrangement" (now blossoming into a full love relationship) that surely you cannot feel compelled to stop now. Keep on going...PLEASE!!!

i'm usually the short-and-sweet type... but these 2 chapters have been the ONLY long stories i've read on this site. they keep me so entertained the whole way thru. don't listen to anyone else, the length is fine (which is why your stories are among the most-read).

keep writing. and i will keep reading

LOVE IT!! the whole story rocks! Very very well-written and the execution and timing of the confession from Jasmin (and I thought at first it was Mark) was fantastic! Just the right amount of surprise and 'awwwwww' factor without being too mushy or overrated. double kudos! Keep up the great work! I look forward to seeing this published and reading new or other works from you. Hoping to read a sequel to this ^_^

Absolutely loved it - shame it was so long - it could have been in three parts - but it had so much hot stuff in it as well as a tender story. Write one for me please!!!

It was very hot. However, the word "turgid" is an instant turnoff. It sounds...bad. Otherwise great.

Hey, is there going to be more from you?

You are good, my friend.

This has been one of the best erotic rides I've gone through! On the one hand I see this being pretty done, but on the other, I want more and can see so many possibilities for our sexy couple to continue.

Thank you fot yet another wonderful story.

God...I'm so wet right now....please right more stories if they are as hot as these!!

MMMMMmmmmmmmmmmmmmm.....I want more!!! Although I do agree it could be somewhat shorter.

I personally think this is a good spot to leave Mark and Jasmin.

I'd love to meet some new characters in new stories!! We know you can do it!!!!

Give us moooore!!!!!

reminds me of my boyfriend.... reading this got me so hot and thinking about him all day. please write more!

Yep, I dug it... I'm holding on to this one!! Thank you "hotknight", well done.

I only had time to read a little each day, but I found myself wondering what would happen next. A perfect story! I can not wait for the next chapter!

I have zero complaints about this story - because it was so damn good!! I don't care if you told it in two super long installment, or 50 mini installments - it was bloody brilliant!

there will be a chapter 3 for mark and jasmin

Seriously, where have you been this whole time? I'm looking forward to future submissions. I would've liked the characters to be a bit more fleshed out but I'm not complaining. That was some pretty fantastic stuff.

This is a wonderful story but it's way too long. I think it should have been split up into 3-4 smaller chapters. This way more people would read it and enjoy such a hot, sexy, sensual story.

This story was HOT. A man like that can be my type any day. Thank you for this hot story.

The story was hot as well as romantic. I love it!

Delicious offering you have here, I was very happy to see that she was finally able to allow herself to open up and love again... their sex was very hot and intense, and I look forward to reading how wonderful their love-making will be!

Thank you for sharing...

and also the start of ch. 2, but by the end of the ch. I slowly ask myself, where is he heading ? As it is nicely written one just goes along but making a summery in the end of ch.2 there is no story, just fucking like in a cheap movie. therfore I can not give you anymore 100.

but I feel like something is missing with the characters... all we seem to read about is them having sex and being sexual (which is not a bad thing)... you hint that on occasions they talk but I wish we could see/read more about them getting to know more about each other's personalities and lives. This would make their "I love You" more meaningful/believeable to me.

I'll be looking out for the next chapter.

this is getting better and better... i was just wondering when he's gonna take her ass... :P

Absolutely wonderful! Always kept me thinking when they would tell each other that they loved each other, you did a magnificent job on this story.