All Comments on 'Not Her Type Ch. 02'

Such a beautiful story and so sexy. She didn’t suck his cock often enough though. Just kidding 🥰

Very nice!

This comment by the Anonymous commenter "why didnt you include that mark circulated her pics among his friends and then forced her to a gangbang ,tattooes,percings and loaned her to his friends" is funny to me.

Why not take the story as it is instead of inputting stuff that wasn't/isn't in it and getting mad?

I agree with Anonymous three spots down and their criticism of Mark's character. I really want to buy into the eroticism, romance, and excitement of the new relationship, but Mark kept going too far over the exhibition/dom edge. Jasmin's habit of "cleaning up" Mark after sex comes off like some weird, submissive, trained behavior that, apart from being gross sometimes, and in conjunction with all his other sketchy behavior, made me more and more uncomfortable as the story continued. I'm glad there was no anal or group sex with his friends.

All the sex scenes were hot and described well, but I skimmed through a lot of it in the second chapter. We still need some plot to carry the story.

This is probably my third reading and I have wondered about this from day one. Why is the author so hung up on making note when Jasmin wore her glasses during sex? As a lifelong glasses wearer, it befuddled me every time it was brought up. Is that a very boring fetish I'm not aware of? Does it have profound significance? Whether they are on my face or not during sex, my glasses are not on my mind and carry zero importance.

Prolonged written diarrhea

Wow about dam time I was beginning to think he was wasting his time

zero respect for mark as coerced her into exhibition and thus putting her into some potential blackmail and sextortion situations at the hands of others

honestly i hated tge fact that he paraded her almost half naked at their first time at restaurant ,then the next time he undressed her outside her house and then the nude pics and kitchen fuck open to world

honestly guys like these get zero respect

i dont think he loves her

coz he only wants her to be a degraded fuck toy for him and to show off to the world

i like the rest but marks forced exhibition and constant degradation of jasmine really made the story sour for me

i wish he would have been more of a jealous , possessive or seroius nerdy type but instead he comes and sounds more like a scheming pimp who has seduced jasmine

initially i really really loved the chemistry and instant attraction btw the two

but you ruined mark for him

i liked his need dominance over her during sex but when he started grooming her and manipulating her to exhibit herself and humiliate and degrade herself,i really really started hating him

you ruined mark for me

i thought this would be a hot romance but it just ruined my mood and turned into a public sex cum humiliation sex cum bdsm trash

i really wished i could give it a 5 star but no it turned into a story catering and focussed on male audience

i really hate that you tried to disguise mark as a shy sweet nerd dominant nerd instead

he just turn out to be an egomaniac ,sadist fake nice guy types who groom and pimp stupid women like jessica

it was supposed to be beauty and nerdy love story but turned out to be a sex slave training story

why didnt you include that mark circulated her pics among his friends and then forced her to a gangbang ,tattooes,percings and loaned her to his friends instead of the fake romance you forced upon the audience instead of a catering to the male audience it was intended to

coz cleary we female audience dont matter to you ?

god i hate mark she deserves someone better than this disguised pimp

no its definitely a forced romance you tried so hard to fool the female audience

god i want to kill mark and evil men like him

why has he to degrade her ,undress and parade her naked no he doesnt love her

poor poor jasmine

Beautiful romance - beautifully written, I truly hope you continued your excellent storytelling elsewhere.

"..slimy folds..."-? you silver-tongued devil...

they're like a couple of bonobos, going at each other constantly...and I love it....

do like that you use the word cunt...worked with a bunch of limeys for years...they don't view it as a taboo word like most Americans seem to

Best story on Literotica, hands down

WOW! ! LOVE them, and the sky-high libidos you gave them-never underestimate NRE-new relationship energy.

I'd noticed this had a higher score than first chapter.

Five, and fave...going to re-check your other stories, also hopeful some new-to-me pop up in Similar Stories

Love this!

Damn they have stamina! I remember those days 😉

Highly enjoyable!

Holy shit. Where the hell can I find me a Mark?

Excellently crafted series. I'm surprised you haven't written more!

Especially in ch. 02, I scanned lot of the constant sex -- maybe only reading a thiird -- to get to the plot, but was lacking in plot. Did have some background, eg the $8000 computer. Author knows how to do sex scenes for sure, but takes more than continuous well-written sex to have that top notch story, even on Literotica.

Needed less sex and more romance -- going on dates, discussions of outlooks, hopes, problems from past (especially relationships), meeting of friends, etc.

Thanks for no anal. This story proves that anal is not needed for writing outstanding sex scenes.

Paul in Oklahoma

I don't care, I liked it.

Please continue to write.

Sincerely

Ramjet

Truly well-written, though I agree with brujay that a bit more personal development between the characters would have been nice before the abrupt "I love you"s.

My only real complaint is that you had a hot oil massage scene, even to the point of Mark dripping oil down Jasmin's crack, and you didn't take that opportunity for him to nudge her sternly along into anal?! And her with that perfect, pillowy, heart-shaped ass. Just shaking my head...

You write wonderfully and all of your descriptions are quite vivid and arousing. However, I would really like to have seen more of a story develop between the two principles and not just an endless series of fuck, suck, and fuck some more.

After saying that, I still can say thank you for sharing your stories. They are well done and worth the time to read.

Thank you.

Brujay

Thank you for the awesome story

For a story on Erotic Couplings, everyone sure got worked up about how much sex and how little romance was in the story. I will admit, I skipped portions of the story because the sex was getting overdone and repetitive, but it was well written and exactly what to expect on Literotica.

About fuckin' time! Geeze! Good read. Enjoyed it, hotknight. First time I've read any "Erotic Couplings". Been hangin' around the BTB "Loving Wives" too long. Cheers!

call me a sucker for romance, but this story blew my mind with the emotional buildup and release. (pun intended)

Absolutely loved this it was great. Would be awesome to see a follow up

Nicely done.

basically now they're now nothing but Sex Addict's. It's not like Jasmin didn't have a viable issue in the first place; that's apparent. Realistically; no one can sustain that level of sex on a daily basis, nor over a weekend.

The thing that r-e-a-l-l-y bothered me about the story; Mark was 300% into providing her pleasure, forcing her out of her shell for 2 1/2 months or so (giving her roughly a dozen orgasms for every one of his); in the middle of page 8, Jasmin finally spent 5 minutes or so to DANCE for him in an attempt to break his control. She needed him; but she didn't deserve him.

Besides; everyone is wrong; the story was 80% Sex, 20% Romance!!!

DKP

A well written story with at least some sort of line and plot to it instead of the usual fucking there was some love and affection, kept me reading to the end.

Unbelievably good.

fantastic.

just loved it. The characters the storyline.

i didnt want it to end

Please, please write more stories.

I hate stories that are so good that it kills you to have them end...

There were times I felt sure that Mark was too good to be true... or that Jasmin was too much in denial for her own good... but I really loved seeing them get to the end that I hoped for...

And I never would have expected the path that was taken to get them to the end...

Only being able to give five stars seems like an insult to the quality of this writing...

Please keep stories like this coming...

Mark is the Dream Man of the Century

This story was awesome and so realistic. Well done!

It needs another Chapter, just as long or longer.

This was one of the best stories, I will be reading it again!

The moron who wanted Less Awesome Sex should fuck off. This was one of the best stories on the site and I only lament that we can not hope for more to come.

I really enjoyed this story... but it was a little drawn out with repeated and redundant sex scenes, which is why I gave it a 4. You could have shortened it by several pages and it would have been better.

That said, you are very talented, keep up the great work!

Have read this story many times -- never gets old. Well done!

I couldn't read this story fast enough from part 1 into 2 my tits ached and my pussy throbbed. Every girl should have a MarkArcher !

Adam & Eve, Romeo & Juliet, Rochester & Jane, Rocky & Adrian, Mark & Jasmin.

A reasonable happy ending with enough plot switches to keep it interesting.

Wish you'd kept writing, but totally understand that you probably put everything you had into the two chapters you shared with us.

WOW ... and thanks again....

I fell in love with mark! Where the hell do you find guys like this?

This was just beautiful. Loved both chapters.

both chapters were amazing!!!!

Very hot, both chapters. You should really start publishing again.

Absolutely wonderful story that (perfectly) melds hot sex and romance.

we now need MORE. came 3 fuckin times.

This story was fantastic to read and kept me entertained until the end. Loved it!

This is quite a story you got here. I can't believed i finished reading it the entire afternoon not having any idea how it will end.

Thank you for wearing me out! True passion that is unleashed in this series - hopefully there will be more sometime. If so, please let me know

i read this story a long time ago and for some dumb reason it got taken off my favorites list. thankfully i found it re-read it and still in love with every single solitary part of it. if there is a god, i will find my mr. archer!

This is the story by which all others will forever be measured! Fantastic!

I loved it it's one of the best stories I've read

Damn that was hot! Great story and great characters. Glad they actually hooked up at the end. Wish you'd come back and write more.

I have to tell you, I really regret rating any previous stories as 5 stars after reading this. I didn't know what a 5-star story was until now. This is amazing on so many levels it's ridiculous. I really hope you write more because you've got some serious talent. I adore these characters and the sex was some of the hottest I've read. Very well written, very well developed, very sweet, very sexy, very fun, and very, very satisfying. My only wish is that there was more of this- perhaps another chapter that allows us to see her telling her friends and integrating their lives more? Who knows. It's perfect as it is, but so much so that I'm sad to see it end. Thank you for sharing this with us!

One of the best stories I have ever read .....xx

What a hot horny chick! I wish I had an affair like that! Incredibly sensuous!

That was simply breathtaking. It made me remember what it was like when I met my husband... Just simply breathtaking!!

indeed you are a writer! you've just created wonderful characters and i may find myself sometimes wanting a mr archer too. xoxoxo

I have read this stories for years, but no story has ever made me feel so much a part of the story. Ilteriorly, gave me shivers when he kissed her at the end. Wonderful writing abilities. Thank you for sharing your story with us I only wish there was more to read. Thank You.

This story is amazing! I want to read more about Jasmine and Mark's love life and how she jasmine will explain him to her friends. Please post more!

Super sexy story. Mark is like the Dream Man of the Century. You write so well and this story is my all time favorite. Dont disappear on us, keep writing! :)

just wanted you to know that I LOVE your story! It is amazing and well written, you have done an awesome job! Thank you so much for sharing

Too bad such is only fantasy. I would love a relationship like that. Loved the story.

Thanks for posting it.

XOXO VIXXXEN

Loved this, definitely need more from you Mr. Knight.. ;)

I wish for everyone this kind of sensual, sexual experience! Absolutely one of the top 3 of way too many stories I've read. Just stupendous. And thank you for writing it. A perfect voyeuristic read.

Does this toy actually exist? If so, I want one!!!!!!!

the title says it all.. thanks.

I couldn't stop reading this! You had me from the first paragraph. I found myself wanting Mr. Archer, not just sexually either. This is definitely worth a rating of 5 stars, as its a great read. Thanks so much for such an amazing, adventurous, exciting story!! :)

Totally awesome ending... I've got my very own mr archer that makes me feel the same way so I loved this story even more!

Simply incredible...the ending was just perfect. You definitely made me fall in love with Mark Archer.

All the elements of a great story. Hot, steamy, and romantic, yet nothing gross or violent, like some of the stories. I loved this one. One of the best! Loved the Romantic Bath and that fact that the guy was making breakfast and baking bread. Anticipation was wonderful (too bad more guys don't figure this out).

One of the absolute best love stories I have ever read... Thanks SO much for sharing it with us.

deep breathless content sigh - thank you, hotknight - you made me smile, pant and seriously fall in love with your story.

oh Mark Archer, I'm in love with you

Best damn story I've ever read here. Hope you do lots lots more!

This was an amazing story! All the scenes were so steamy and hot. But I love how you told it from his pint of view too. How he loses control and his thoughts about how he made her feel. Absolute perfection :).

I was glued to this story and read it multiple times! You absolutely should write books! I would buy them in a heart beat!!!

You could write books!

I love these stories, and this was one of the best: Nothing like someone who is "detail oriented" and paying attention, and giving all of their attention to the particular happenings of the moment!

Smart man, too, to wait this woman out, until she was ready to face the truth!

A nerd can be a diamond in the rough! Too many young women don't get that!

GREAT STORY!!!

I said I would enjoy the story better if you made them fall in love, and you did! you're awesome WOOOO! write more :)

Woah.

I'm hoping one day to experience that type of intimacy with someone I absolutely love.

Too bad you haven't written any other stories. This was quite enjoyable and Mark's stamina... :)

This is honestly the first erotic story I've actually continued reading after I came. Mark reminds me so much of my bf and I found myself really wanting them to get together. Not often do I find a story meant for jacking off to that I actually care about the characters. Thanks for a fantastic story!

-A girl

He's SO my type!

I wish I was in place of Jasmine and had a guy like Mark. Or maybe my guy should take coaching from Mark. Definitely going to refer this story to him!

I read your first one and i was glad that she said the words

In the 3rd one you should show how her friends react to them

Your great

you need to right a book.i would read it

Loved the story and the characters... I've been all hot and bothered ever since... Mark is the kind of lover every woman should have... I wonder if this character is based on anyone real...

I'm reading this for the 23rd time and it never fails to get me turned on. I love the "aww" factor at the end. Completely unexpected but so right! The series sounds like it ends here so now I'm just waiting for more of your writing. You have talent and it's only fair that you share it.

I had a good laugh at the tag you have for this chapter: cocksucking. There's a bit more than that happening in this chapter such as mind-blowing sex! haha, I'll be waiting for your next piece.

This is so amazing! You should do more, your writing and detail is awesome. I loved it, and have read it many times now :D

OMG, please...please...please come out with a third chapter to this story. It was very well written and extremely interesting. I'm in love with these two characters lol :)

When will chapter 3 be available?

Funny how love sneaks up on you with the most unlikely person. More chapters please?? Damn this was sooooooooo good :>)

Ive read this so many times! Please do a Ch 3!

Pure enjoyment - and great detail for one's brain to process. I hope you write more!

Wonderfully written. I'm not really into reading lots of text online but this is one of the few I'd happily read a couple of times. Excellent.

Didn't think you could top the first story, but...... truly awesome!!!!

This was the best story I have read on this site. Reminds me of someone I used to know, now I want him back :)

story on Literotica. Hands down.

I thoroughly enjoyed both parts! Very, very well written, everything flowed and drew me into the story. Sexiest erotica I've read in a long time. I'd love to see a third installment!