All Comments on 'Not Her Type'

Please continue the story!! I love the characters! I want MORE!!!!

I love this story. Its very erotic and sensual and just plain amazing. Keep it going please!

This is one of the best erotic stories I have ever had the pleasure of reading. Quite frankly, at this moment, I cannot remember any other. Writhing in anticipation here, please continue the next chapter ASAP!!!

What a wonderful surprise, opening this story and finding page after page of incredible goodness! Some of my favorite parts were her thoughts as he was walking her home after their first dinner, when she was thinking, "no, you will not be carrying me around impaled on you tonight," or "you won't be head first between my thighs tonight" and all the while he's getting bolder and bolder!<br><br>

I swear, reading about their first night together, I am practically vicariously sore all over! It was so intense. But the added touches of humor throughout really make it special.<br><br>

I can hardly wait to read more!

Even though, this story is "labeled" as an erotic encounter, it has traces of being a full blown romance. Please take the time to develop fully these characters because I am starting to fall in love with them. I want more, author, pretty please? As weird as it may sound, I want more plot and character development than sex. You write the sex well, now lets bring these characters to life. You have given hints of some personality, not much, but it's there. She has some complex issues, but we do not know much about Mark.

This story deserves to be fully developed. Don't blame me, author, YOU created likable characters that any reader would want more of...

to the end is all I can say and I hope that you publish an epilogue...... very talented....

yum.

Amazing story. The descriptions were fantastic. I would suggest maybe seperating long stories like this into chapters since 8 pages is a little long.

Please keep it going! And I wanna know more about Mark please! Awesome story!

That was hot! Great in every way! Sure do hope there is more of this story to come. You have really written a good one here, thanks so much!

DON'T LEAVE US HANGING

Fully captivating, with a lot of eroticism and touch of romance...'M loving it !!!

Great stuff. I hope youn are going to continue this story

Absolutely great!!!!...I hope there's more...

I'm not a smoker, but i'm going to have a pack of cig's now. MMmmmmm very very nicely done! P.S: I want more!!!

Wow!!!!!!! An erotic wet dream and page turner. Please continue this story, after all, you did tease us about her submissive nature. I am definitely putting this one in my favourites. Keep on writing and I will keep on happily reading!

Linda

Great story! Keep it going! By the way, are you British? I love British guys!

But I think you should take this off Lit and send it to a few rw publishing companies. Or find a literary agent. There are a lot of wonderful authors on Lit, but most of them aren't ready or up to publishing standards. This WAS the best story I have read so far, and I've probably read at least 10,000 stories on Lit. And it IS easily good enough to publish. (I worked for a publishing company, albeit just running the returns department.) Made me look at my writing and firmly rename it marshmallow, forgettable fluff. You are going on my favorite list right after I post this!

Very very good! And that is a very long phone number lol

Love your writing style. Cannot wait for the next chapter. I did think that 8 pages was a bit long.... but enjoyed the story nonetheless. Definitely look forward to reading more from you in the future.

I really liked this story, I thought it was hot. And to think he wasn't her type, well I'll take his type any day.

Thanks for the story.

I have personally written two or three posts on this one story. I can't help it. You created something that is really not just a short erotic story; it has the potential for something for so much more, if you wanted. Quite frankly the best erotic I have read... I honestly cannot remember liking any other than yours. That is quite a compliment I know, but I really mean it. I love everything about this story. Your characters are so bold and real. You pull your readers into it, you know? If you wondered whether or not, you had potential or skills in writing, you obviously do. Look at all of your reviews:) Please, please continue with the story, eagerly awaiting for it. Lemani1972

Truly publishable (is that a word?) quality and I am so, so hoping for more! I would PAY for more, it's that good.

amazing...good work:D

i loved it! in fact i was stroking myself as i read it and i came by the 5th page... hot, wild and lusty.. good times

I really loved this! I masturbated to it a couple of times! I can't wait to read more of your stories!

Amazing...I haven't cum like that in awhile...brilliant work darling...brilliant!!!

That was absolutely amazing! Sizzling hot and deliciously sensual, you got me completely mesmerized in front of the screen. :) You have a talent of evoking very vivid images and appealing to all five senses which is crucial in erotic fiction. The story was arousing and captivating at the same time, and I have to say -- and I mean it as a compliment -- reading the Mark and Jasmine's walk to her appartment that had been one amazing session of foreplay and with so much (and so well described, as in sensations rather than actions) of kissing, I was sure you were a woman! Lol Because you obviously understand the power of anticipation. ;) But Mark's POV part got you deciphered. ;)

Well done, I'll definitely indulge in Part 2 too!

This the hottest thing I've ever read. You've turned me into your character... unable to get enough. I'm sure I've had an orgasm for every page.

oh my... that left me dripping wet. I couldn't help but to get myself off a few times to that story. Very nice work.

FANTASTIC work! Loved it! Haven't read a very well written erotica fiction in a while. You've managed to make it very stimulating and enjoyable to read despite having Mark & Jasmin fuck more than half the time. Usually it would've gotten dull or repetitive or too much but damn, double kudos to you! A very good read! Keep it up! I look forward to reading the part 2 and more of your works!

And for the record, you kept me up when i'm supposed to be dead tired and asleep hours ago... couldn't take my eyes off your work haha. just really appreciate your work :)

Although it was all good, it was too overwhelming... and if I were Jasmine I'd have collapsed from exhaustion and overstimulation long before the end of page three. I prefer one climax to my stories (multiple orgasms, yes, but only one literary climax).

I have read both parts to this story and though they fuck more than I think is possible, it is totally hot!

This was amazing one of the best things I have ever read on the site. Write more, write more! To the person who said its not possibile, poor you it is. I thought that the descriptions were very realistic. are we in fact sure that the author is male!

Perfect descriptions, had me coming back multiple times.

Honey, this is one of the hottest, most sensually exhilarating stories I have ever read on literotica. Great character development, intelligent, and sexy. If pornos were like this, I'd watch them all. Keep up the good work!

Your story is incredibly hot; thanks for sharing it with us.

My boyfriend will be thanking you!

dont get me wrong, it was really hot and all, but im sorry to tell you that no human being can have 30 orgasms a day, it got to the point where it was just unrealistic.

I don't consider myself all that skilled or well equipped a lover and I've given a woman more than 30 orgasms in 24 hours on several occasions. I may have given someone 30 orgasms in one series, never counted although I have occasionally noted the time and I've kept a lover at or near orgasm for over half an hour quite a few times. Probably not possible for normal guys without pharmaceutical help, I doubt i've orgasmed more than 12 times on my best day, but I took the comment as referring to Jasmin, I didn't count but Mark's performance didn't strike me as realistic.

Put some time and effort into it, find a lover you can completely open up to emotionally as well as physically, experiment with toys and new kinds of foreplay, everyone ought to experience really terrific sex and it's not all that difficult to attain IMHO, but on the other hand I've read some studies suggesting there may be a genetic factor deciding how orgasmic you are.

And HotKnight, thanks for the great story, I'd give it 8.5 out of 10. Sorry to be a harsh critic, the plot of the first chapter had no surprises, somewhat vanilla sex for what I thought was an unlikely time into the relationship, and I'd think it more realistic if it was either an edgier relationship or there was a deeper emotional connection but that's just based on my own experience thus far. I hope you write more stories about those two or other characters. And if you can think of more mainstream stories I think you should consider trying to become a published writer because it was as well written as quite a bit of what makes bestseller lists.

Bravo!!! i give you standing ovation!!!

The seduction on walk from restaurant to her appartment was no doubt on of the hottest i have ever come across...

You certainly are a hell of a gifted writer.. Kudos..

One of the Absolute best..

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Gary (Garyandrewsbodyguard@yahoo.com)

The striptease from the Bar to Flat was like oooooooofffff cant stop reading again and again. I was reading on my Phone sitting on the Airport!!! Just tooo adicting. Rest was good but nothing to beat those scenes

Thanks for this great read I wish I could have a man that made sex

like this for me.. The lovers are so giving and selfless. The hot sex

scenes were great to pleasure myself too.. Thanks again!

OH my goodness!!!! If only this were true and about me!!

What an introduction - was dripping and had a huge wet spot on my shorts when finished.

Shared this story with my lover by texting segments and we will fuck all evening!

Thank you

My penis broke reading this and I didn't even touch it thanks for a great no scratch that phenomenal read :-)

Damn, hotness personified!!! I can get down with this.

not a fan a bit overrated and not that amazing but al right i guess

Wow what a fantastic read! My hubby will be in for a treat tonight!

really great story, loved reading it!!

One of the best I have read on this site

As one who just recently discovered this web site I have been very fortunate. Fortunate in that I have stumbled upon and read some really fantastic stories. My personal favorites include incest, erotica and romance.

This story has to be one of the most romantic and erotic stories I have read. Some may think it is too long or it has too much detail. It is obvious they have never been fortunate enough to experience anything even remotely close to this in their world of "reality". It is the amount of detail that can only be really appreciated by those who have had this type of passion. I know this story is "fictional" but you either have an extraordinary imagine or this story reflects at least some of your own personal experience. I do know that in many ways I was extremely fortunately enough to have lived this so called work of fiction. This story, so far, takes me back and reinforces an older piece of my life.

I really enjoyed reading your story. It was fantastic and filled with lots of passion.

This is by FAR one of the BEST stories I have yet to read on this site! I did not take my eyes from it once, it was not too long, I wanted it to go on forever. It was never boring, always interesting, and kept me wanting more. I do feel as though Mark and Jasmin SHOULD fall in love. It's always better for me when the sex becomes more than just sex, when you know the feelings are there. In a way this is very romantic, they obviously really just want each other and given Jasmines unfortunate past, Mark could be the one to patch her up, put her broken pieces back together. He already has her rapped around his finger in one way, but men have feelings too! I want to see them fall for each other. It would make it all that much better I think!

dat was a great story, a great fuck. I fell in luv wit this story. Aside making my cunt flow with some juicy nectar, it has made my opening long to be filled in the same way Jasmin's own was! A hot read indeed!

Would like them to start a relationship so we can have more variety in locations... one of the best though!!

A good read, however a bit repetive. Could get the whole story by rading the first two pages. The rest of the story repeats itself.

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I don't think your story is repetitive at all. I think this is an awesome story - very hot, steamy and sexy!

Not bad at all.

I thought this was a great read,

I agree, this is definitely a good read.

Cannot wait to see where this leads, an excellent build up thus far.

Fuck that was hot! Not sure which one I envy more.

Life needs more 'arrangements' - lovely read.

it wud hve been nice for them to fall in love

Fuck. This is hot. Sizzling hot. Thank you.

Truly a lovely fantasy. Are there really women like that? If so, I was born 65 years too soon. Cheers!

I ended up skipping over some parts of story because of it.

O my gosh

Love the story

"We'll see" (Chills)

This is hot and now one of my very few favorite stories!! Awesome!

I need me a Jasmin text me baby let's do it #248-921-3528

I hope you decide to grace us with further stories.

second time, so can't vote again, sadly...

if anything thought even hotter this time-!!

the walk back to her apt, leaving her panties in hallway, stummbling thru her doorway in only sandals, glasses, bottomless...her 'cleaning' him up their 1st nite together; him cumming so many times makes long-retired cocksman/famous 'cum-like-a geyser' Peter North look like a green schoolboy...definitely saving just in case didn't go into my 'all-time best' folder 1st time; and noticed how many women commented on/luvved it too-think more than any other het story I've read on here

damn i find it both infuriating and super hot when he made her walk with her tits on display in public he stripped her at her apartment door

sometimes he is protective cuddly bear and the next moment he us an alpha predatory dom seducing ,manipulating and coercing his prey into super duper hot sex with some public exhibition of his sub and all without a single shred of arrogance he is quite humble he never even expected her to look at him let alone sleep with him but given a chance he is so confident that he ll get into her pants the very same day they met

one min he is a cute nerd another a hot devil

he likes her offbalance and shocked every min

loved it so hot words so carefully chosen to make us feel what the two of them feel at same moment

wow 5 stars

This was a great story! Super hot. I admittedly was a little thrown off by the description of a mixed girl as a “mongrel”. Very clear that the author is not a person of color. Still, overall, very detailed and fantastic story.

Great big wow from me but really odd ending

Fantastic story.