by thealphamale
Great writing so far, just preparing myself for the angst and waiting if it's similar to Unrequited
This is a great story but so slow paced. I hate these stories where both parties are clearly so into the other yet refuse to be brave enough to admit it to the other. I hope they will face the truth and get together soon. Keep the chapters coming please.
I like a "slow burn" story like this one. That's the way my two relationships panned out. If I want a wham bam thank you man" type I go to the vids which supply that storyline (actually very little story or character development just sex!). But each to his (or her) own
I can tell this is gonna be a great story - true-to-life (well, to MY life, anyways) and yet tantalizing - I know how I'd like MY life to end up, but really have no idea. Maybe this story will be a blue-print for me out of my predicament of long-standing... Can't wait to read more!
Love it, the retrospective and the now. Can’t wait for the next chapter, thank you awesome stuff.
Wait, wait - Gabe is gay too? That little slice of story just slips out in a couple words, as if it means nothing? That needed to be a plot point examined and work into, not just glossed over. The story is good so far, just moving to slowly.