All Comments on 'Not Just a Hitchhiker Pt. 01'

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 4 years ago
named wrong

should have called this "A boring story about a hooker"

oldsage_1oldsage_1almost 4 years ago
A little lite

A little lite but most first chapters are. Keep writing and I'll keep reading. Looking for Chapter 2.

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago
INCOMPETE

This was shaping up to be a 5-star story, which I started to give it, but then realized that the culmination (climax -- or second climax) was missing, so awarded it what it a leave-you-hanging story deserves:

⭐⭐⭐.

Paul in Oklahoma

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

I think a $75 refund is in order.

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