by outdoorhorny
A little lite but most first chapters are. Keep writing and I'll keep reading. Looking for Chapter 2.
This was shaping up to be a 5-star story, which I started to give it, but then realized that the culmination (climax -- or second climax) was missing, so awarded it what it a leave-you-hanging story deserves:
⭐⭐⭐.
Paul in Oklahoma