All Comments on 'Not My Type: Adele Ch. 07'

Lilly and Adam are finally getting hitched. So great, thank you.

And I love that Adelle was so stumped by Nate's love declaration. I can't wait for the next chapter.

Loved it!!! Now I have to wait a week --- how will I survive!!! And Lilly....oh will she ever learn. The drama of Jenny -- oh yeah there's always a few of those in every church and you did that one beautifully. Oh please have her and her aunt get their comeupins. I watched those folks think they have the church in the palm of their hand and just the devil themselves. I look forward to their dimise -- Work it out Firstkiss. Once again, you seem to have the church community down to a "T". Good for Adele speak her heart and mind to the little imp. Keep it coming and do I see Double Wedding????? Ha Ha

OK. Great job and see ya next week (or sooner if you wish ;-) but not Thurs. Laker game and all)

Lakergirl

A whole week for the next chapter. Come on FK I'm sure you can more it up a notch please, pretty please.

I mean surely there's some Human Rights act we can use cause to wait a week for the next chapter would just be torture. :0)

Excellent writing hun keep it up :0) xxxx

I can't tell if I hate you for spacing these a week apart, love you for spacing it so that I have something new every week, or just love knowing that you have it all written so there won't be any unexpected pauses. Either way, I love this story. Definitely my favorite so far of the Not My Type series - I can really empathize with Adele, and Nate is so sexy...

Really liked the 'time passing' segment - brilliantly done. I am officially jealous of the way you write, girl. :-)

Can't wait for next week's installment!

God bless your gift of writing! simply amazing!

I was reading along, feeling like the story has lost its momentum. But then wham! he said he loved her and it was getting all beautifully intense again. And then along came Lily's tantrum. She's getting rather childish... Don't know if I care so much about Lily getting it on with Adam at this point. I think you have built Nate and Adele characters so strongly and beautifully throughout the chapters that it's a shame not to give them any more attention they should be getting.

Do you realize, except for like two chapters, there's almost no interaction bewteen Adele and Nate? She's either blithering on about something, or she's talking to somebody else about the 'relationship', or Lilly's being a spoiled brat. I mean, you're telling us about the relationship more than you're showing us. Please fix it--I love these characters and want their story to be written to match them!

and do not leave their names, being nates vocation and adeles injured heart. the fact that there is little interaction between them is understandable, and her thoughts about her friends relationships is a window into her mind, she has always been the "rock" of the three and rhi the free spirt and lily the child and she still sees herself that way , hence her commenting on them, how they have changed or not, and i think she is slowly waiting for lily to grow up as rhi has settled down, when that happens she can act for herself. and i do hope nate shows her his feelings, in a non-cliche way, as i think a man of the cloth would definatly be different in his approach, and please have mention of lilies brother and flick, that sounds like a good side story to help the adele and nate get together

I love that you are letting the characters grow and evolve in their own time. For Nate and Adele to have already fallen into bed would have short changed them. I love that their relationship is more about being together when they are together than trying to impress each other with great dates or fancy evenings out.

Real love, in the every day things, is what will out in the end. The ability to change a baby's diaper or rescue a cake from an oven are every day and real - and it is part of what makes your story so special.

Thank you for making my day!

I've been reading your stories for almost two years now. "Not My Type" is my favorite series. I love the realism you have imbedded in your characters. Too many people on this site want fantasy and that's okay... sometimes. Every once in a while, you have to inject a little realism into a story. Nate and Adele are quickly becoming one of my favorite couples. Keep writing. I can't wait to read the next chapter!

Please, write more!