All Comments on 'Not My Valentine's Date'

A slightly unbelievable plot that because of good writing and character development and some backstory somehow came together and was believable. Even high hopes for the future. Well done.

The right person at the right place at the right time!

5

Well worth the read. Good luck with the contest

Excellent! Would love to see a second chapter.

Quite different from the author's usual writings. I thoroughly enjoyed reading this. Long enough to allow interesting character development without being too lengthy or tedious. I look forward to more from the author.

"Not My Valentine's Date"

It is great stand alone.

But please write at least a second chapter.

Just some things that this old man would like to see

How the romance continues?

Maybe the ex has remorse Ha Ha.

How the office handles the romance?

Dave

Well done. Agree with some others, love to hear the rest of their story. Especially if she triumphs over the cheating bitch someway, somehow. 5*

As a story it can stand alone 5 stars !!!!!!

Please Give us a second chapter

Do they stay together?

Maybe the ex tries to get back with him Ha Ha.

Just what the office gossip will be?

Really sweet Valentine story, loved these characters.

Nice, very nice Valentines story. Glad they found each other, and I'm thinking Teresa will do him right. Five stars, and thank you for it.

Nicely done!

Well done!!!

That was a rather sweet story. The plot was very simple, but that let it quickly step past any holes. What you wrote of the characters made them ending up together feel nice, and your writing style made the story a better read.