All Comments on 'Not on the Menu'

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tazz317tazz317over 8 years ago
THE SNOW ON THE ROOF AND FIRE IN THE FURNACE

proves the point, no matter how old,, the numbers have a way of matching up/ TK U MLJ LV NV

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
Just, Wow!

Beautiful story, beautifully written! Gives me hope at my age. I also hope to see more in this vein from you.

irishcream44irishcream44over 8 years ago
Yes

Love the concept. Thanks

clackormanclackormanover 8 years ago
Top Ten Story!

That was, without a doubt, one of the finest, well written stories I have read on literotica. Thank you for submitting it, from an Oregonian that appreciates stories set in my favorite state!

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
great

just delightful. many thanks

wildcat69awildcat69aover 8 years ago
Thank You!

Much more than just a "Fuck" story. Emotional connection. Nice.

Wolfie2UWolfie2Uover 8 years ago
A great read and a few laughs along the way

Being in my sixties I could relate to many of the moments. I'm going to read the rest of your stories in the next few months now I have time.

I have written hundreds of stories but never polished them up. You have inspired me to review and have an editor help me out.

"I did not trust the table" now that was funny!

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
Thank you

Nice.

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RasmatRasmatover 8 years ago
I moi agree with the others.

This is a top tier story. A little kindness, compassion or encouragement costs us nothing to give but can hold more value than gold for the recipient. At 65, I have seen this from both sides. This is a fine example of love given freely yielding great dividends. I will now read this writers other works. Five stars.

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
Real Deal

Great story!!!!!

GforGrahamGforGrahamover 8 years ago
Enjoyed

Really good read.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 7 years ago

Der Author, Nice job of weaving a love story with a little heat, two loveable characters and a believable story. Your story telling skills are great and I will delve into more of your other works. Thank you, jntiques

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