All Comments on 'Not So Fun Games Ch. 01'

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PistolpackinpetePistolpackinpeteover 13 years ago
Never trust a man named Peter....

....but the bitch is just as bad so no-one to feel sorry for, preferable in this category.A little new and young to be office mgr and in an already jaded marriage but I guess it could happen. Still, my kind of fun and the first 4 I've given in weeks! All these psychos that kill their wives, why not try this option. It's a moneymaker!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 5 years ago
Why is this tagged as BDSM?? It should be Horror or Non Con at the very least!

It’s clearly not BDSM there’s nothing Safe, Sane or Consensual about any of this.

Theres no love lost between them but FFS the bastard didn’t want the inconvenience of a divorce so he sold her? It’s absolutely monstrous. Human Trafficking is a very real issue and there’s absolutely NOTHING erotic about any of it. It doesn’t work as a fantasy because it’s too realistic, I don’t mean the methodology just the basics of people being taken, sold and used. The husband apart from being a sick fucker he's stupid as well, there’s nothing to stop them coming back for him to be sold on.

FutafemdomFutafemdomalmost 2 years ago

The situation is hot enough. I personally like bondage devices and what not, but your tags and category are kind of confusing. As anon pointed out, this should either be in the Nonconsent genre, or have a nonconsent tag, or have a slavery tag. "Sex Games" and "BDSM" while happening in this story, do not aptly describe it.

StoryTeller07StoryTeller07almost 2 years agoAuthor

Okay thanks for that. After all this time I won't bother changing the descriptions, but have taken notice for other stories. Thaks for the heads up! Gary

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