All Comments on 'Not So Little Brother Ch. 01'

That was so hot. I hope you continue with your stories. I really enjoyed it. Thanks for letting memories come back.

That's a pretty good start. Can't wait for the next chapter

I still shower with my sis when I visit her. Our initial consummation wasn't quite this straightforward but still a hot story!

A hot story, but you could use some editorial assistance for spelling errors. Looking forward to the next chapter.

looking forward to future chapters.

Please bring us Ch.02 as soon as possible. WOW

Please bring us Ch.02 as soon as possible. WOW

It's a great story but, in May 2005, you posted Ch. 1 of something else and *never followed up.* I feel we'll be left "hanging" once again.

I wish you would write the next chapter of this fine story. I can't wait to read the ending of this.

I hope you finish this because I'm really enjoying this story.

Thanks for the kind words. I'm currently in the middle of a thousand different things, but I do get to piece the second chapter together bit by bit. It should be ready soon.

yadda yadda yadda... Like we believe you. Your last story was from -05 and now this and it is already -08. Story was great, it was really good, hot and nice and all. But just admit it, you wont write a part 2.

The story was very well written, but if you spend few years to write just a novell, well, there are plenty of other good authors who have love for writing. Geezz, three years and just two intros, I wont bother looking for chapter 2 after this. So even if you write it and upload it, you wont get any readers anymore.

never finished,over sized dicks,over sized tits we are lucky he didn't finish it was a waste of time just like the rest of his stories

This is very poorly written. Is English your first language?

Any chance there will be a chapter 2, lo these many years later?

The lack of spell check and many misplaced and duplicated words make this story almost unreadable. The work appears to be written by a 14 year old who got poor grades in English. A common word processor would identify most of the errors.

Please rite a sequel it has damn good potential also i like the way you didnt hop rite into sex it keeps the storie flowing so to speak id honestly pay for this kinda slow moving storie it keep the brain workin keep up the good work

Present tense, past tense, present tense, past tense............pick a tense and stick with it. Seriously, if you're going to write a story, learn how to do it properly. This is garbage.