All Comments on 'Not So Private Dancer.'

I love the way that you strike from so many different angles. Your stories are like a box of chocolates, you know, like the ones that Forrest Gump had. Great job.

Loved the story.

Will someone please explain the 'box of chocolates' thing for me: every box of chocolates I have ever bought has a little leaflet or a description - with pictures - that tells you *exactly* what "you're gonna get".

Loved it. Fun and romance. What more could you ask for?

I wonder what they all do on Thanksgiving night....

Wish I could give this a higher score but incest angle just isnt my thing

Keep it up

I loved all the twists and turns and the funny things that happened. Thanks

Stipper ftl

With that many twists it had to a big one! I understand his feeling so well I would have to buy the tickets to Vegas for them. You might want to continue this one, it could be a lot more laughs!

You made me smile, LYG. Great story, warm, loveable characters. And yeah, <I>stupider</I> is a word.

Another enjoyable story with the right amount of humor thrown in for good measure.

Boyd

And all the humour was great reading, too.. Lesley might have to whup Lana's butt if she follows through on that threat; or was that a promise?? Love your stories LYG, they're always fun to read.

I thoroughly enjoyed this little gem. I loved the "tongue in cheek" quality of the writing and the humor was obviously self-evident. One could almost (almost) sympathize with young John. Whew, what a family, lol.

Fine story. Kept me involved right up to the twists at the end.PW

Great story with romance at its best.

A bit different plot and great characters. (Hey, Lana could be recycled in another story!)

Regards, Jack

Just a great, great story. I love your tongue-in-cheek style in this story. Just so much fun as the hints of incest becoming real were so irresistible. You are one great writer as so many of your stories confirm.<p>Thank you so much.<p>PT

It was fun. I enjoyed the story and thanks for your time and words.

Well written, funny, and romantic. It doesn't get any better than that.

A Great and well told story i couldnt stop laughing when John was asked to be the dancer for his sisters party and the descriptions you describred was hilarious it was funny.lol i wished the story had more chapters i will give it thumbs up with a score of 500 for a well told and superb story.

Atlanta,Ga

Pat

As poor John was drug down the garden path, his female relatives kept on spreading the go grow. What a great tale, the older sister was definitely willing to play with fire and our boy Johnny kept on throwing away the matches. Thanks for sharing a wonderful slice of joy!

.... A guy in trouble, or a guy with a sister named Lana. HOLY SHIT! I'm loving your sense of humor.

This story is literotica at its best. Well written with no slack, funny, amusing, and sweet. It holds up in a 2nd and 3rd reading. Congrads LYG. A brilliant contribution.

Just enough to get the mind imagineing multiple endings. Excellent!!

Good job. Light but with enough depth to be interesting.

Thank you for your hard work.

Fun story. Thanks.

except leapyear.

tom anon

P.S. Would you introduce me to Lana?

keep up with your quirky stories. they keep a shit-eating grin on my face from beginning to end.

Thanks

Always the top winner for the emotional set - and well the kinky crowd to here -

Laughs and fun throughout - thanks -

Chicken shit - LMAO!!

He needs slightly bigger rocks for his thong.

Chuckle ;-D

Thx!

Poor guy! Had to elope to escape his horny sister(s), lol.

You had me in stitches most of the time!

This story was just plain fun to read. Well done.

A fun and funny tale. Well done. Thanks!

VisualPerv

Just great.

Hilarious how it slowly sunk in for John exactly how pervy his sisters are, and how 'curious' they are about their brother. He's only slightly better by his own admittance, a shame that part wasn't developed further :-)

hardly a romance but some funny incest crap and a bit of fuck fest to...

Love how you pushed the boundaries but kept the real romance

Not a good story with a poor ending

All I want to say is, "Ah, John, you big chicken!"

So much incest potential; so little time!!!

Light humor runs through most of your stories. I love them.

Decent story,with a bit of humour.

Into the genre of Incest is happily not one that you delved into, thankfully. I'd skip alcohol and visiting family alone overnight without Lesley along just in case. Good choice on eloping I think, tongue-in-cheek so to speak. Signed: BTW

Disappointing that the thing with Lana never went anywhere.

Such a missed opportunity, I felt like this story just cocblocked me :-)

Please consider writing an extended version where they get it on.

Hell, maybe even a threesome.

you had me laughing my ass off from beginning to end with this one. thank you. i needed that.

Like the soup and milk, a very condensed story; but very entertaining. Thank you!

Very entertaining and fun read, you knew he was going to be discovered but how it happened was well done.

This story made me glad I never had a close-knit family. It made it really easy to tell them “Hell No!”. But this was a very entertaining story, so thanks, LYG.

Good one, as in another good one from LYG, funny, sexy and teasing

"Mom was surprised when I drug Lesley away without a word."??

WHY do Americans use the word 'DRUG' instead of the CORRECT word - DRAGGED???

Are Americans REALLY that DRUG obsessed???

A fun story. 5.

Hilarious! To the anon from 5 months ago: Yes.

Asshole John didn't have the balls to say NO

Haha, thanks for a good chuckle 🤭

Crazy family . Leslie needs to be careful!!!

That was fun! 5 stars DMW aka

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call me weird, but I liked the incestuous current that ran through that story

maybe you could also put this in humor and satire