All Comments on 'Not the End'

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 years ago

What happened to Dirk? As a muscular football player, I'd almost expect "hair in all the right places" -- that means a dusting of hair across his chest and abs, and a cock that won't quit. I miss Dirk after the first half page!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 years ago

I find it hard to follow this story, what happened to Carey in the last year, was it a car wreck that injured him, how did it happen, was Jordy’s boy crush killed in it? How do all these characters across the stories fit together? Who is Dirk and why does Carey seem very uninterested in him yet is getting fucked by him? This is all confusing and not easy to sort.

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