All Comments on 'Not to Cause Offense Ch. 02'

I'll be reading your next chapter with interest:)

Good story . cant wait for what happens next

I like this a lot. The premise is interesting and has me interested in what comes next. I will be looking forward to the future chapters.

Love where this is going and cant wait for the next installment

I really want to see what happens next here. This world reminds me of the witcher and I will be eager to see more of it.

You are a very gifted author and I can't wait to read your future offerings. I am saddened by the knowledge that this story has been placed in limbo for a bit though.

Goodness me. Very, very good work. I'm eager to see where you go next with this. Your decision to depict of untrammeled lust as a *negative* is an interesting one for this site!

Very very interesting story and I really hope it continues someday!!!

I have been enjoying your writing. Would like to read the rest of the story.

I'm crushed that this doesn't have more

This was a great read, shame there isn't more.

Bummer, bummer, the story is a stunner, but the author is skittish, so we get no finish!

Without the rest it is nothing --- just a collection of words going nowhere.

Too much unwarranted violence and conflict for my taste. You lost me at the start of page 3 of this installment.