by miles801801
Oh, my gosh, I hope from the description that this is like foreshadowing a story for Seth and Kyle. I loved this story and I would love that one, too.
I liked this even better than the original story. It was really sweet how they helped each other have children. I thought it was much better paced than the first one. I loved how you went that far into their future and not just a year or so. Great job on it!
Loved it! Good to have them back, been waiting for them. 5 stars. And btw, can we pleas pleas pleas have a Kyle/Seth story, pretty pleas?
I'm already 1/4 the way done with Seth and Kyle's story. I started it a few weeks ago but with problems around me I'v not had a chance to write much. Keep the comments coming :)
26 years in 2 pages???? And about half a page is somple smut!!!! Really poor. At least, the proofreading was better. In a story, action should happens in the present and not only recounted as something done past tense!!!