All Comments on 'Not What We Planned Ch. 01'

Your story is very well done and very erotic. Can't wait for more chapters.

I am entertained by people who peruse a story without really reading it and make a judgment about it and the people that are entertained by it. Their idea of entertainment seems to my mind to make everyone else feel inferior and make themselves seem normal. If they were truly normal they would not be checking out this site so much. My comment on the story is that many people who go to swinging parties should be prepared for the unexpected, and that weird shit can and does happen IRL.

cant wait for the next part

thank you !!

Great start. We look forward to more chapters.

Ignore the haters! Notice that they are always anonymous.

What a perfect combination of characters, plot, and sex! Very well written, hope you keep it going!

Quite plausible and erotic. More please.

not bad but juct once i would love to see the guy with the so called"real" cock be the sub.

Great story, can't wait for new chapter.

Please please write more… I am begging you.

Fantastic! Great start!

Hell of a great start. I’d love to be that husband. Watch my wife take that big cock and be the submissive clean up boy.