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Click here"Holy shit that was hot! All of it!" Abby exclaimed
It was intense, but I needed a second to recover before I could get excited about anything again.
"Oh baby, you came so hard on my big black cock. You're such a good little sis...." And then then video ended. What was she about to say?
Abby didn't seem to notice. Maybe because jizz was starting to drip down her face and she needed to clean up. She ran to the bathroom to wash her face. I took off my shirt and cleaned myself up as well. At that point, I laid back, clearly satisfied. This was the kind of spice I was hoping to add to our sex lives.
"Sooooo, ummmm, what do you think about doing some shopping this week? I was thinking we could get some new toys maybe? I know I'm all excited and you're spent, but baby that was soooo hot!" Abby said excitedly.
At this point, there had been zero discussion about Reggie, and plenty of discussion about cranking up our sex lives together, and I was happy to keep that going.
"Sure babe." I replied. The next couple of days are going to be hectic at work, but let's grab dinner out on Wednesday night and then head to the store."
As we headed off to bed that night, I was feeling much better about our situation. The truth was going to be much different than that though.
As I nodded off to sleep, Abby grabbed her phone and scrolled through her texts. She found Reggie's message and gave a simple reply.
"I'm in."
- COMMENTS
Vulcan_in_Ohio21 days agoNeeds serious editing. Also, seems less about Interracial Love and more about wife becoming dominant, getting interested in hubby’s ass and prostate, and ultimately some pegging. Hard to believe hubby would be so willing to become a sissy sub. In real life, I think this marriage would be toast, but I am willing to suspend disbelief for a bit to see what happens.
Anonymousover 1 year agoEven in the third person’s description it was still hot! Reggie and Eden need to plow both Abby and Anthony at the same time. Then clean up and switch. Reggie needs to open up Abby’s backside also.
dwayne369about 2 years agoNeed to have someone proofread your stories. A LOT of mixed usage of him/I etc...
Anonymousover 2 years agoThank you so much for posting more….I had been waiting and checking for months…..more please!
TiffanyFoxxover 2 years agoGood next chapter. Could do with sorting out which person it's being told in though. Can't wait for the next part. Looking forward to the inevitable Reggie plowing the feminised sissy. I hope she's in chastity by then.
KinkyDirtyover 2 years agoAuthorHey everyone, just and FYI, but I copy/pasted the incorrect version here for upload. I sent in the edit almost immediately after, but it still hasn't been updated, so I apologize for that. Just a dumb mistake, but the correct edit will be up at some point. I know the team at Literotica gets a ton of submissions daily.
ShinyMagpieover 2 years agoThis is fantastic! The careful and realistic build up is amazing! Please take your time but please don't stop writing this!
PenPal2001over 2 years agoGreat story! Not structurally perfect, but so erotic and seductive that it leaves me wanting more. Please add another chapter soon!
pfeelthyover 2 years agoHello. I hate saying this, especially about a cuckold and sissy story, since I enjoy them so much and they get so much shit on this site but, this really needs editing. Specifically on perspective. It jumps around in the middle of sentences, making it unreadable. It's just two distracting. One moment you are in first person with the main male character and the next you are in third person.
Here are a couple of examples:
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I quickly turned off his phone and jumped up, trying to conceal his hard on in the waist of his boxer shorts.
"I'm going to take a shower" I announced. I needed more time to himself to cool off.
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I would suggest writing it entirely in third person as you clearly want to show what the wife is thinking and feeling, and the main character couldn't know those facts.
I stopped reading when I got to the second example above. I didn't rate it, in part because I didn't finish it. Good luck and please keep trying. You seemed to have some good ideas.
