by EverydayMermaid
This is delightful. Every guy wants to be seduced by a girl like Rachel.
. . . with a compelling plot, interesting characters, and sexual detail that is subtle, yet very hot. Can't wait for more.
A sweet story so softly told, it made me want to cry, but I loved it so much, nothing like the crude uncaring stories that appear in most submissions.
Well done, more please.
Chrissie
This story appears on Amazon. A fake author named Ashwin Kr has stolen about 20 stories from here, and is making money off of our work. You have to contact Amazon if you want it taken down.
People who are trying so hard speak English correctly!
If Smutty... is correct & you are stealing, get better at it!!!