All Comments on 'Not Your Routine Traffic Stop'

by greeneyedvirgin

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 11 years ago

Ahahahahahaha, loved the ending. Most of these stories skip the consequences, but it's nice to see one of the few that not only doesn't, but comes up with something more original and entertaining than "he went to jail for rape".

Harryin VAHarryin VAabout 11 years ago
very hot but

the baby thing at the end ruined it... yeah I know it is just a story but after a whole year a baby would bound strongly with the mother .

Author,,, a baby is not a suitcase

ForsakenliteroticaForsakenliteroticaabout 11 years ago
very hot

Wow, that was a great story. I hope you write more!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 11 years ago
damn hot

now that was good all the way threw please do more like this one

AnonymousAnonymousabout 11 years ago
LMFAO!

Ignore the idiots who choose to take only one aspect of a story & treat it as real. I loved the ending. Please write more!

kipolokipoloabout 11 years ago
just bloody hilarious

had me hot and bothered and finally all cracked up!

NotabanymoreNotabanymoreabout 11 years ago
Without that ending

You would have received five stars, honestly.

cowbullscowbullsabout 11 years ago

I hated the ending or you would have gotten all 5 stars.

MacD7MacD7about 11 years ago

My only complaint out of all of it is that police cars have hood mounted cameras, if you were going to rape a woman, it would not be on the hood in plain view of the camera. Other than that...great story and I liked the ending

AnonymousAnonymousabout 11 years ago

what kind of an ending is that???? what a heartless wrench

AnonymousAnonymousabout 11 years ago

Hell yea then it ends like a G awesome story dude

AnonymousAnonymousabout 11 years ago
The ending made it

Perfect ending. Exactly what he deserved.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 11 years ago

Awesome ending. I'm not sure if entirely realistic but its what he deserves...

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
OMG!!

OMG. IS THERE A CONTINUATION OF THIS? I HOPE THERE IS! SO HOT AND LOVE LOVE LOVE THE ENDING!

rod43rod43over 9 years ago
Fucking hot.....

Loved this story, the raw cunt fucking......and the delicious ending.......

OldUncleJackOldUncleJackover 7 years ago
amazing!

Wow - this was a fabulous story...love the ending! the detailed description is fantastic - had me rock hard !!

rwp1967rwp1967about 4 years ago
Wow.

Great storytelling. Wasn't expecting the ending, but a great story, had me excited from the moment he pulled her over.

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