All Comments on 'Not Your Traditional Family Xmas'

The story didn't seem to be finished. Looking forward to reading the rest, though. Really good, so far.

Ended way to early

Wtf ?that's it no climax nothing but a little fore play.

all that build up for nothing

Maybe you don't know how it ended.

I can give you a little advice about that. It didn't end like you ended it. You wanted to warn your few followers about incest? FYI, talking about incest isn't incest, it's talking.

You don't deserve the 1 star I gave you, but then a 0 doesn't count. If you can't give us a story, then we shouldn't be expected to give you anything more than the lowest score.

Tidy up your writing too. Spend one minute extra to fix your mistakes.

Write more/finish this mess

More please, I like where this could go from here and hopefully a happy ending for the two of them.

Fuck face et cum face

you left it short

Well, about these who hate incest. It's in the correct section of taboo, so you could have imagination what to come.

And to the author: nice setting but the is no development of characters and the story stops to abruptly mid action. I have the imagination, you don't allow to think and write about actual incestuous activities.

Sorry all, it looks like this story got truncated - I'm seeing what I can do to fix it.

Please continue.

Thanks for avoiding such drivel as "like a pro", "pre-cum" or demeaning or abusive behavior. It was a pretty nice read.

Looks like the story content issue is fixed now - if it says THE END at the end for you, then that's all the story I wrote :-)

that was very good! I hope there is more to come!

The second you see British spelling, you know you're about to read a fucked up beta story. This is no exception.

Patt 2? I like where this is going.

Pretty hot. What are they going to do for an encore?

Quoted from the story:

"Be my Christmas fuckbuddy. I need it. We both need it."

You were going to get a five from me right up until you wrote that sentence. Brother/Sister incest is one of my favorite subjects. But whenever you take the love and emotional connection out of the equation, then you ruin the formula. Stories about just plain fucking will never pique my interest, incest or not.

Agreed with ScottishTexan. Love rather than simple lust is the key ingredient in a good sibcest story.

I liked it, just a nice amount of sex.