All Comments on 'Not Your Typical Family Ch. 04'

sweet baby Jesus that was hot best chapter yet. cant wait to see what's next

I bet mommy slut is home..

Where did jaxs come from

Anonymous - Jaxs - is a friend of Jazzy/Krissy from High school - will get her back story soon.

I'm not really into this sort of lifestyle but, damn. Please keep going. Love the storyline.

First, the story line is good and interesting, but you should make notes for yourself as to which character is which and what their individual characteristics are for story continuity. Second, to remove one’s clothes is to “STRIP”, not to “stripe”, a mistake you’ve made repeatedly. In the same vein, it is “Cliff Notes”, not “clef” notes. A clef is used in music, Cliff notes give a summary of a piece of literature.

Thirdly, spelling and grammar software is not very useful unless grouped with revising and editing. AI is not advanced enough to correct your writing without human oversight.