All Comments on 'Not Yours Ch. 03'

A lot of drama happende in this story. I still liked it though.

I think it may be the best story ever written in this category. I loved the first 2 chapters This final piece just put the cap on it. Great job. I gave you a 5 SS06

Loved the ending but.

serious editing needed....

Great story and series, though a little dissapointed that not much was written about their relationship. I mean they did have two kids. None the less, great series.

Everything turned out fine in the end, but how come Mom gets away scott free? I was hoping for something horrible to happen to her in the end, like being reduced to prostitution, arrested, sent to prison and killed by her dyke cell mate. Doesn't she have to pay for the way she hurt everyone out of pure meaness? AnHoa Rifleman

I would've thought that losing her only daughter would be punishment enough.

Just had to read this again because it just stuck with me for awhile.* Very good story even after the second time around and who knows ~~ I might read it again someday.

OKC ~~ you just never know.<<< JAG

this is the second story ive read of yours,its just as good as "Death & Love"!

liked the story - good character development - nice ending.

i see you have more stories about the other characters, will read them.

you get a 5.

Looking for similar story where they go on a cruise then discover they are actually related

Great story all round. Love it. AAAAAA++++++

very enjoyable

Super! Thank you!