All Comments on 'Note By Note'

It sure is good to see a new story from you! It's been 20 years since you first posted and you still have it! Thanks so much.

Good tale.

That is outstanding.

Thank you so much.

Yeah, I think you are one of the biggest kids around, Mr. Wildone. An Original Gangsta, and it's an honor to read a new story from you. Thanks, Randi.

A shot in the heart with this one. Wistful, sweet, and beautiful - I loved it. Thank you for this; it was one of a kind.

What a fine story! glad you're still writing.

5

Way too sad for me. 2/5

You made wonderful music here.

Hope you play for us again soon.

Very nice!

I’ve read some of your other efforts….. none of them touched me until this one. And it was over too soon, there is so much more story here. And ending the way it did? So not satisfying or sufficient. I cannot possibly imagine what process you went through to reach this deep. But I do appreciate, that you did well done.

JIAM

muskyboy, 2/5 because it's too sad? How did you rate Romeo and Juliet?

Nicely done.

Hooked

I agree with other comments...would like to read more about "Kid Rollins"... thank you for very fine story... Across49...

Where was the sex? One moment Wanda is sitting at a table with some scruffy kid and the next it’s some old woman talking about the ‘one that got away?’ WTF

What a great story…very moving. I could almost smell the smoky rooms.

Great story in all regards - and not enough sex? Use your imagination, dear reader (muskyboy) - use your imagination. The best storytellers - and Juan is certainly that - paint the picture and let us - require us - to make of it what we can/will If you need everything laid out in photographic detail look at photographs

Every word, every allusion and image. Simply outstanding. So glad I read it.