All Comments on 'Nothing'

by HaloOfDarkness

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 9 years ago

Very interesting, creative and unusual scene. You know how to create something erotic out of nothing. More to the point, this scene proves that the mind is the most erotic organ in the body

HaloOfDarknessHaloOfDarknessabout 9 years agoAuthor
Thank you

@Anonymous.

I appreciate your comments and I agree about the brain.

As is often the case, the anticipation, the want and the need that races through us can take us higher than any action. And yet, that build often calls, whispers or screams for release.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 9 years ago
My God

As a very submissive female, I have to say this may be the most erotic story I"ve ever read. It's almost like you can see into the mind of you partner....and an interesting dynamic, you know everything about how you partner thinks, and she thinks she knows how you think, but nothing goes down the way she expected.

I don't have the way with words that you seem to, and that's not exactly what I wanted to say, but I hope this comment shows you how brilliant I thought this story was.

JudyLeeJudyLeeover 8 years ago
SHUDDER!

Cruel punishment.

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