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KahunabobKahunabob9 months ago

Second time, story is even better. I'm either grinning like a loon or having trouble reading along b/c someone's suddenly cutting onions. I need this to be a movie. Ewan McGregor as Ewan McLough, Naomi Harris as Amanda Abasi.

linnearlinnear9 months ago

Better every time I read it.

GeorgeGaleGeorgeGale8 months ago

What a wonderful and touching love story. Wonderfully written and told....................():\

Tim_the_cajunTim_the_cajun8 months ago

Beautiful story. Loved it. Thanks.

Border_ReiverBorder_Reiver8 months ago

A canny yarn with a cracking sound track

Cheers

WindySwimmingWindySwimming7 months ago
Still Wonderful!

Second read through, still wonderful. Never get enough of your contributions to this site. Thank you for all the fulfilling experiences on reading your work here.

Mega kudos, five stars!

AnonymousAnonymous6 months ago

Over the top with the Queen and the royals but was a good ending for Ewan and Amanda.

Amy is a cheating bitch. She and Dave will not recover together. She actually fell in love with Dwayne, and will lose pretty much everything, including her kids.

Glad the racist predator Dr Krall got his ass handed to him both physically and legally by Amanda. She is a keeper.

Taco76310Taco763106 months ago

These stories are your greatest strengths. We still need to know what happens to Amy. Thanks for sharing.

AnonymousAnonymous6 months ago

Ewan should have forced the issue with Amy and scumbag Dwayne as soon as he heard the first rumor.

dgfergiedgfergie5 months ago

I had read this quite some time ago and of course the title grab me again looking for something new, and it was as good as new. Great story.

AnonymousAnonymous5 months ago

An 'over the top story' by an over the top writer! Thank you Q! 5 STARS

somewhere east of Omaha

VicGoodhouseVicGoodhouse5 months ago

QHML1, You're always incredible & outstanding. Hope You continue writing more prolifically.the🙏🙏

tipacanoetipacanoe4 months ago

One hell of a story you have written. Damn I loved it. Thank you.

AnonymousAnonymous4 months ago

Why can't I give this more Stars?

5 is not enough!

Thanks for sharing!

AnonymousAnonymous4 months ago

Wish I could give it ten (10) stars!!!

AnonymousAnonymous3 months ago

Even though the story was rice with errors a proofreader should have caught, this was a very good tale. Some of the errors were flipping POVs, first person to third and back, and punctuation errors, mainly commas, that changed the entire meaning of a sentence. Also, not always making it clear who was talking. Also, quotation marks missing from the beginning of paragraphs. Stuff like that.

But all that aside, this is a five star story that I enjoyed very much.

JPB NOT BOB

AnonymousAnonymous3 months ago

I see that my disappointment with lack of editing caused me to rate the story four stars 8 months ago. I agree with myself. Four stars.

JPB NOT BOB

vanyevanye3 months ago

Did we ever get a Dave and Amy story?

PhredDaggPhredDagg2 months ago

Another TERRIFIC story. Well done.

tsgtcapttsgtcaptabout 1 month ago

Well written, yes a few editorial errors but liveable. Thank you.

Russell11Russell117 days ago

Absolutely fantastic story, can't say anything more

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