by qhml1
Second time, story is even better. I'm either grinning like a loon or having trouble reading along b/c someone's suddenly cutting onions. I need this to be a movie. Ewan McGregor as Ewan McLough, Naomi Harris as Amanda Abasi.
What a wonderful and touching love story. Wonderfully written and told....................():\
Second read through, still wonderful. Never get enough of your contributions to this site. Thank you for all the fulfilling experiences on reading your work here.
Mega kudos, five stars!
Over the top with the Queen and the royals but was a good ending for Ewan and Amanda.
Amy is a cheating bitch. She and Dave will not recover together. She actually fell in love with Dwayne, and will lose pretty much everything, including her kids.
Glad the racist predator Dr Krall got his ass handed to him both physically and legally by Amanda. She is a keeper.
These stories are your greatest strengths. We still need to know what happens to Amy. Thanks for sharing.
Ewan should have forced the issue with Amy and scumbag Dwayne as soon as he heard the first rumor.
I had read this quite some time ago and of course the title grab me again looking for something new, and it was as good as new. Great story.
An 'over the top story' by an over the top writer! Thank you Q! 5 STARS
somewhere east of Omaha
QHML1, You're always incredible & outstanding. Hope You continue writing more prolifically.the🙏🙏
Even though the story was rice with errors a proofreader should have caught, this was a very good tale. Some of the errors were flipping POVs, first person to third and back, and punctuation errors, mainly commas, that changed the entire meaning of a sentence. Also, not always making it clear who was talking. Also, quotation marks missing from the beginning of paragraphs. Stuff like that.
But all that aside, this is a five star story that I enjoyed very much.
JPB NOT BOB
I see that my disappointment with lack of editing caused me to rate the story four stars 8 months ago. I agree with myself. Four stars.
JPB NOT BOB