All Comments on 'Nothing Between Us'

Another refreshing story that is a flashback fo many people to their youth. Totally enjoyed every work of it. Fantastic job and a pleasant read

I didn't expect the ending, but the rest of the story was great!

@My-Erotyka a very well presented path from simple acquaintance through friendship to love. Showing the personalities of each character in the story, it felt like you were one of those people. A beautiful description of sex and showing how you get to know your own and your partner's bodies. And despite all the turmoil, love brought Thuy (Jennifer) and Jacob together. 👧🏻♀️❤️🧒🏻♂️

ps. Sorry for any errors and linguistic inaccuracies, I don't speak English.

Best regards, SissyBoy from Warsaw, Poland. 👩🏻‍🦳⚧️🧒🏻❤️⚧️👧🏻

Great story well done. Love to read more of this story.

Beautiful story and I have no doubt that it was based on a real life experience, but why is the man in this story written like a complete imbecile?😮‍💨

Love it. Sensitive, arousing, and cute.

The story was interesting, but confusing. The sex between the two, Thuy and Jake, was sensual and hot, but all the breakaways involving Jenny, then moms et al, broke the continuity. Having read it once, I don't think that I would want to read the story again. I don't want to belittle the author, but it sounded like the author was high on e LSD when he or she wrote it. Maybe, just me based on comments from other people here.

Verbose! Somuch extra trash in this story it was bordering on BORING. If all of the extraneous trash were removed it could have been a good story. With all the extraneous trash it is only mediocre. MM

WOW! This is a great story! I read a few pages and had to leave for about 4 hours. The first thing I had to do when I got back was to finish reading it.

Thank you!

What a beautiful, wonderful story! As I read it, I found it resonating with a time in my life when a very dear friendship suddenly bloomed into the discovery of a love so deep and complete that it shook me to the depths of my being. We had to wait longer in life to make the discovery. What is also interesting to me is the very end of the story, because when we found our connection she told me that years earlier her mother had said, “He’s very much in love with you, you know.”

I hope that you get the recognition for your writing that you desire; I am certain that you deserve it.

Wow. This is one of best stories on Lit.

Excellent character development. The explorative physicality nicely detailed without turgid vocabulary or skills demonstrations beyond their experience—almost as engaging as their word play. Enthusiastic five stars.

One minor break in reality for me was imagining rolling down a well filled condom and then tying it off. Much easier to pull a condom off a softening cock and knot it; much less messy and likely to still contain more ejaculate than one rolled off.

Stop writing literotica. Go write a romance novel - with this kind of amazing skill, you can easily publish bestsellers. 10/5.

In generaln, I find the actual hardcore intercourse parts of stories tiresome, if they go on beyond a paragraph or so. I love the flirty touching leading up, and the aftermath, but not the extensively chronicled act. The expections to this are when the acts are over the top farce (sexual olympics for instance), or when the direct intercourse is written in such a way to tell the emotional stories of the protagonists. Many sex scenes could be switched with ones from other stories, and authors, with only a few minutes editing. That is not the case in this story. You are a very good writer.

Burnt Redstone was right, you write a winner in every way.

Beautiful story, thank you!

Truly heartwarming, love it.

This. This story right here. This is the reason I started writing erotica. I don’t think I’ll ever rise to this standard, but every time I read this, I feel a rush of enjoyment and investment. I’ve never read anything before or after that involves me so completely, and fills my head with visions Thank you so much for this I owe you.

Beautifully written - excellent!

This was amazing.

Very nice

I love that point when two people realize that they are meant for each other. It's best when two friends make that discovery. This story had all the hallmarks of a mighty love. I almost lost it when the lack of a condom caused a break in the action, but the quest for a box and the addition of Julie to the tale made it even better by the end. Thanks!

To: Anonymous-about a month ago...

Hate to tell you, but, yes, people DO stop in the middle of their first time like that!! Had a girlfriend years ago, we got hot and heavy watching "An Officer and A Gentleman"...ended up in the bed, she was a 'virgin' (she said) and was not on any b/c...

We had to stop and run down the street to a grocery store that was open; couple of silly people in there (me, 26 yrs old and working, she 19 and flunked out of 2nd semester at college!)...bought a box and hauled it back to the apartment I shared with my best friend...fucked out brains out that night...used (3) of the condoms!!

She DID get on the 💊 pill...but relationship did not work out...lack of respect on her, and her parents' part toward my career...too bad, but I am happily married to the love-of-my-life now...

Do not presume to think human nature is SSSOOO weak!

This was a great storyline that lost its giz at the 2/3rds mark. It fits a part of anyone who knew the love of their life from 12 yrs old and you both educated one another. You might consider making two stories with one on each side of the break for condoms. You had a great rev-up working until that point and it never came close as that heated point again. But man you were right there.

Well done.

What à lovely story. Keep writing.

Then two were so horny that there is no way they would have stopped to go to the store for condoms.

You succeed!

Excellent reading! In my opinion, any story that jumps straight into sex is unremarkable and comes off as unrealistic. Like others have stated, when love is involved during sex, the tension, pleasure and arousal is elevated to a new level that cannot be compared to just casual sex. It involves beyond physical pleasure. "Nothing between us" is just the type of story I was looking for: authentic, believable, heartwarming and sexy. Thanks, author!

Wonderful, Wonderful story! Some say it took too long to get to the sex. I strongly disagree! It needed the build up so we could understand them even better. It could have been an even longer build up, but not shorter. 5* for sure!

Wow... after over 15 years, It's LONG overdue for me to write something here. This is one of my all-time favorite stories. There's multiple different reasons, and I'll "ramble my way through some of them" here. ;)

I was about to edit "stories" in the previous paragraph to read "sex stories", but I think that "sells it short". The discovery that the characters are going through is _much more basic_. At the same time, sex is probably the only "lens" they can use to "see" these things. So, I believe this story's topic is MUCH broader than erotica.

That being said, sexual discovery is a _delightful_ (and very enjoyable) "lens" to use. I seriously doubt I would be spending so much time thinking and writing about this without the detailed descriptions of the characters' reactions and sincere enjoyment of each other. ;)

"Innocent, fascinated, and unashamed": these are some of the words that come to my mind to describe how Thuy appears to feel about sex. The "unashamed" part is _especially_ important, because USA society "programs" us (I'm in the USA, of course) to feel ashamed of sexual feelings. The fact that Thuy connects so strongly to her heritage is a big part of what makes this story work.

Wow. This commentary is shaping up to be _much_ "broader" and longer than I originally thought. I'll come back and write more later. There are other things I must do elsewhere right now, though.

Innocent young love!!

I first read this story just after my divorce some 7 years ago. Loved it. Great characters and involvement.

I always wondered where you went since '06. Thanks for the 2022 update.

Thanks for the good stories.

Wonderful. Great tension, Perfect repartee.

More please

And thank you.

Good premise.

Good story line.

But really takes too long to get to the real sex.

Four stars.

Loved the story! Well done!! It felt so real...5 Hearts!

Lovely.

Really good story. One of the best I’ve read on here. Please do more chapters.

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Absolutely phenomenal. There are several good writers on here, several good story tellers who aren't near as good writers, but your work is truly among the very best. It took me twenty years to find it, but the pleasure of reading it was worth the process of finding it. Thanks for sharing.

Sweet.

Excellently done

good

Beautiful

Absolutely perfect. Thank you.

What a lovely story... just amazing... I just want to read it again and again...

What a lovely story... just amazing... I just want to read it again and again...

One of my favorite stories, and one I revisit. Perfect for a romantic like myself. Thank you.

Bravo, amazing story. I’m not crying your crying.

I wasn’t expecting to feel so much. It was like being taken back to my first time with the love of my life. So much caressing and so few words. The description of falling into another person and reacher deeper and deeper into love.

Well told.

Had some flashbacks of younger days.

Well done

One of my all-time favorite stories I revisit and reread often. Thank you.

Great build, good character development, good detail.

Great story full of detail of growing love.

Outstanding. Written so one could relive their first time with their true love.

Greatest story I’ve read on this site ever!

Great Chachacter development. Loved the story. Love them both, the way I wish my first time was❤️❤️❤️😎

This time through I took your advice & read the deed story first. My comments on that story were kinda harsh as his words & sentences were rather stilted and childish. I did applaud his concept though & when reread this story I was able to discern its roots.

It was a great story frame to pursue. Well done!

Very nice story. Right from the start the two were really cute together. It's such a feel good story.

Two things were a little odd for me.

During the first sex there was a lot licking in many places. Too much for me to be enjoyable during sex.

And the second thing was the titty fuck. Thuy said she has a B cup earlier. I think it would be easier with a little bigger breasts. Also for something like this you usually need lube or oil or a lot saliva. I think I would have gone for regular blowjob/handjob.

These things pulled me out of the story for a moment. Besides that it was really nice reading this.

Wow. This the first story by you that I have read - can’t wait to read the others!

Excellent! No criticisms, just a great read.

Very well done. Good grammar, good story, good fun.5 🌟 stars.

Bill S.

I have a weird question. Where did Jake's father come into the picture. He is literally not mentioned until the last line of the story. Before then, we do not know if he is dead, missing, gone, traveling (like Thuy's dad is), at work, etc.

Did May go to the cabin too?

Amazing story. I’d love for a sequel to see their success.

Weeping.

What a great story. Loved it

And P.S. I just looked at your BIO page and saw your note there dated March 2022 and was delighted to see you are still alive and kicking. I always wonder when I read something so good that it evokes something deep within me but see that the author hasn't added anything new in years. I can't help but wonder, and feel a little sad. Thanks for checking in.

God I love this. Incurable.

So sweet and sexy - what a welcome change from slam-bam-thank-you-maam fuck fests. Loved the character development, the shared sense of humor, the uncertainty and exploration, the candid self-reflection. Hope M-Y-Erotica will write more new and creative stories!

This really was a wonderful story. Good buildup and excellent presentation.

Love is bind, in many ways! Thank you for many great reads, I read them over and over

Wow… that was a great story! Definitely my favorite now

Wonderful story 5x. First timers are always clueless. It's a good thing to be patient with one another. There's a condition called AFO: Asian Female Obsession, a mental disorder and incurable (I hope) Ears are an unexplored erogenous area. I recall my first time- my high school teacher- with whom I experienced more passion in my left ear than during my prior girl friend's entire relationship. In Basic, whenever I was asked, "Are you a virgin?", I always replied, "Yes, but only in my right ear." I still am...sigh.

Anon56

Then the saying is true " Slow and steady wins the race " .The slow build up all the way and the minute details add to the tension of the reader. And when the act is consummated one has to resort to one's hand.

truly and honestly, top 3 stories I've read! Absolutely fantastic and evoked all those feelings from my own youth.

You have a magnificent feel in words!

Nice romantic first time story

Love this story must have read it a half dozen times. The only problem is what happens next? She is at Yale....

Wow! Dude - you write! Great. Young love. Discovery. You nailed it.

Best. Story. Ever. I'd give it 20 stars if I could.

Hi I did love this read, it was so true 2 the way it is. and now thay can get on with there lives?? Keep righting they store's as you are very good. thank you again..

If the only way this could be better is if there was a follow up. You are a great Writer

The best story of finding young love that i've read in a long time. Reminds me of Foreigners hit song "Waiting for a girl like you".

Wonderful story!

very sweet, lifetime movie award

So Good. Just wow so good. No writer on this site has ever captured me with a story s this one....It bring you back to the first time and makes me wish it was this special..

omg. came for the sex, stayed for the absolutely beautiful dynamic. the witty banter was 11/10

Beautiful story, beautifully written.

This was a pathetic and very boring and totally not realistic story.

why'd he need to leave school if his dad is alive? I kinda assumed he died/ Great story

LOL "bout damn time"

Beautiful story, so descriptive and well constructed. Loved the story line and it ended well, made me smile with nostalgia...!

I liked the slow-blow fuse character of this story. How all those raging feelings for each other crept to the surface slowly. Feelings their parents knew about but the two seemed to be unaware of.

Beautiful story! Thank you! I love their personalities, their interplay, rapport, connection. I didn't want the story to end.

great

My favorite kind of love story! Although, i kinda KNEW how it was gonna end. CUTE!!!

Lovely...Too wonderful to want to mess it up with words or expose my feelings too deeply

Awesome, just awesome. You know what you did well, great job

Beautifully detailed!! Thank you for writing this :)

Keep coming back, and it neve gets old

Too bad you stopped writing

The best!