by SilverFoxMullet
Such a sweet romance! You’ve put a lot of work into the characters and dialogue, and it paid off. And it’s about as wholesome as you can get for this site :-) I love that they are controlling their own lives and dealing with the expectations around them so well.
Incredible well written romantic story! The characters and their interactions show your efforts. I wonder what will happen next. Will she get pregnant? What happens when they go to universities?
The fact that it wasn't the same huge member and DD chest and jump right in and every four letter word is refreshing. Even better it had a great story line.
Wonderful story about two very different and (mostly) unremarkable people falling in love.
You saw my original comment yesterday - and i cant get it out of my head - is there a “more”? I think the case can be made either way and better to end here than watch it get progressively banal and repetitive like so many extended stories do. But, gosh, i have been imagining Devin’s mom confronting her glowing daughter and understanding completely, then Devin asking mom to make her an OB-GYN appointment, and the other Devoin’s parents and how to get them on board, and the first year a University, and ….. Lols. Forgive me. What a great story of young love/first love - brought back lots of memories and remembered naïveté.
Best story I've read in a long time. Well written. Not pornographic. Realistic. Just.... awesome.
Easily one of the best stories I've read.
5 stars doesn't seem to do it justice.
Thanks.
Please write another chapter. The two young lovers may have a future, and if he pees in her at the right time, a baby, the most precious gift...
Love Canadian stories taking place in my neck of the woods. Great story
Yes, I agree with the other comments. I hope you’re write the next chapter. I love the way you handled sex, tender and realistic I also laughed in several places. And I realized what I missed in my teenage years not being sure of myself. Great story, enjoyed it. It felt heart warming.