All Comments on 'Nothing Left For Us To Do'

All I can say!

nicely done-very erotic thanks

there are a lot of really hot and enchanting elements to this story, but two glaring problems. first, as mentioned already, there's a number of grammar issues that are small and should have been taken care of. and secondly, it's very boring. there's no real sense of character, almost like reading out of a recipe book. really research some top rated stories on here and try to follow the growth of character, and how to write internal conflict.

I liked it but, as some pointed out, it has a few problems. Liked the way you built up to the grand act. Keep writing.

I agree with the previous commenters about the spelling and grammar. I understand about the mother not trusting rubbers but what was all the sprays and liquids about when it came to birth control? Whatever happened to just going on the pill? And it seemed weird that the mother wanted him to eat her pussy but didn't want him to touch her tits.

Great story but ididnt care for the strapon part.

I gave you five stars not because your story made me jerk-off, but because as I read you the story brought back very fond memories of my own mother. I won't go into details... but as it has been said, there is no love like a "mother's love." She was purely sweet seduction to me.

please write more =)

That was amazing I had an expirence like this with my aunt god it's was amazing

Is that Wedding Bells I hear? for Mom & Son!

Even when it could be a bit more steamy, the story was well directed, tasty and with elegance i just think that the bath tub ending was not the appropriated way to finished, instead i would started in the bath tub, and carried this to her bed where she could be properly fucked till she squirt all over his dick and balls craving for more hard pounding meat.

Never the less it made me hard for sure

Sheila's little wimp couldn't even measure up to mommas asshole and lost control at the end. as usual for a family wimp.

wow what a great story, I could not stop rubbing my cock and l love that the women in all your stories have hairy pussies, love hairy

The constant communication, mixed messages , varied denials leading to climatixx surrender was fantastic. Full marks *****

Another good read. As for the negative comments, I've seen and tried to read a lot worse stories on this site.

Thanks for writing this.

Warren

A very good read! Thank you...

He should keep pouring cum into her cunt and leave her with a baby bump

Story and character development/actions were logical. I enjoyed this story. Her sexual life, to include her former marriage, must have been terrible to not have experienced oral sex. For her to admit to her son her lack of knowledge and experience was amazing. Until the end of the story, the son's understanding and sensitivity to his mother's needs was remarkable. Finally, the emotional and sexual epiphany between mother and son beautiful. I would like to see this story develop into a series. 5 star rating.

This story was quiet a good read.. thank you 5🌟..