All Comments on 'Noticing Ella'

by ngnx

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 5 years ago
50:50

one one side it was HOT

on the other he is just going to let her leave?

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
Damn

Hot story! Shame she has to leave. Would have liked to have seen where the 2 of them go. Ending up together would have been my preference but without having more join in.

BassNutt51BassNutt51over 1 year ago

Very cute and bitter sweet, you almost wished that they would become a couple. Great writing, I'm sorry that you haven't posted anything new. Please come back and keep up the great work ☺️

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