All Comments on 'Notty High - For Naughty Teens Ch. 01'

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Teacher44Teacher44about 4 years ago
Good start

I'm interested to see where this goes.

sthsthsthsthabout 4 years agoAuthor
Thanks.

Thanks. I currently have three more chapters working their way through the editing process. So, I should have a new chapter a week for the next couple weeks.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 4 years ago
Interesting start

The story isn't half-bad so far; you clearly have some creative ideas and that helps a lot with keeping smut stories like this fresh.

sthsthsthsthalmost 4 years agoAuthor
Thanks.

Thanks for the feed back. Sameness and tired stale tropes are definitely something I'm always trying to fight.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 3 years ago

I love this story

Girls with short skirts turn me on, and ones that would do something like this, even more

I felt bad for Drew

He got raped, straight away

sthsthsthsthabout 3 years agoAuthor

Thanks. Same here. Honestly, I don't really feel bad for him, I envy him. lol

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

He seems so cute, I want one haha. Felt real bad about the rape but also it was so well written I couldn't help but touch myself, oh the things I would do for a chance to be her. If only I had the confidence lol

AnonymousAnonymous11 months ago

Mistake at a key point: Things "SPLIT" onto her shirt!!! Your stories are All lost from there!!!

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I just submitted part 3 of Unfinished Business. It should be up in a couple of days. Please let me know what you think. This chapter became a behemoth and had to be cut in half, so expect part 4 in January. Also, I am currently hard at work on two more stories. One was going t...