All Comments on 'Now Mother's Gone Pt. 02'

Both parts are the best incest story I have ever read. Heck, even The Best story I have ever read. I really liked the way you brought both sides of the story together. Great Job!!!!!

Part 1 started off so well. What a great concept, and well executed. The storyline and second person pov has become confused and confusing. Too bad, but I won't try to finish.

The first part had an actual story, at least for the first half of it. This has been lost to nothing more than a sex driven romp of self hate. Your accusatory narrative is off-putting. I’m not going any further with your writing. It’s not a good style for me.

I have no idea what I was just reading. Read a little of the first part then jumped to the second part hoping it would improve, but it didn't. it was like reading an ultra-boring documentary, it doesn't work for erotica. There is a storyline, I think, but it is lost in a confusing read, there is no dialog to draw the read in, no real character description. The first two Anonymous comments sum it up. This could have probably been a good story from a different point of view but unfortunately, the POV used failed miserably.