All Comments on 'Now Mother's Gone Pt. 04'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

I can't believe this is where the story ends! I loved the 2nd person pov and the storytelling was picking back up in this last part! Really wanted to learn about Jane's obvious crush on the daughter and how much more bold they will be around Jane

JerkGentlyJerkGentlyover 1 year agoAuthor

Thank you for the kind words! This is not where the story ends by a long shot, I have just been so busy in RL I haven't been able to do any more editing recently. However if you check my bio you can find the site where I originally posted the story, where it continues for a significant distance further.

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

More please

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