All Comments on 'Now Starring Ch. 01'

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 15 years ago
Exciting start

I really love this story so far.Its very interesting and its holds u once u start reading. I am waiting to read the rest, hope it will be out soon.

Great job!!!

SoulChildSecretSoulChildSecretabout 15 years ago
Wow

Great beginning. Can't wait to read more.

punkin1077punkin1077about 15 years ago
very nice...

chapter, i look forward to reading the rest.

Calit69Calit69about 15 years ago
It's got legs

Nice read. Enjoyed it. Rather puzzled with David didnt realise he was in a gay bar. Not the sharpest knife in the drawer is he???. Look forward to next chapter. Feel sorry for Vartan, probably peed in his porridge

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago

UNFINSHED NOT UPDATED FOR OVER TEN YEARS AND TO BE HONEST IS COMPLETELY CRAP DONT WASTE YOUR LIFE READING THIS .......

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