All Comments on 'Nowhere to Run'

Yeah, sorry. There’s a missed you’re instead of your in there. Grammarly is stupid. My bad. In case it wasn’t as obvious as I thought it was, the box in the closet had the strap-on she wanted to try on her husband in it. Thanks for reading!

ah, I like it.

a couple who communicate in a story of Lowing Wives.

it's magic.

5⭐ for originality.

be careful, it's borderline neither credible nor realistic.

Well, that was different! In a creative way, I mean. I really do wonder how some authors come up with their ideas.

This was too damn weird not to give full marks.

Funny! 5*

But a little off the deep end for my tastes or the loving wives category.

Loved it, and you put it exactly where it belongs. I missed the word play, but not the action. Fuck Greg.

Justice served!

5

Now that was different and I liked the little prick getting taught a lesson about not messing with married women. You have to admit the Loving Wives category is hard to stay out of.

Fantastic, the best thing I have read on here in many days.

But she lost her job anyway? She could have just left.

Perfect! 5 stars

Nice twist on a familiar trope. Good pacing and a tidy "dismount".

Short but fun

Can't think of a better treatment of the bosses desire to fuck a married employee. The video would still be going out.

Cute; 5*

😂😂😂😂😂🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟 Good one!

Sometimes over the top is just right! 🤣

Now that was fun.

Tried to like it, and Lord knows the asshole deserved it, but something about it just seemed odd, maybe a bit juvenile.

I think the unbalance comes from the incompatible details. So the wife enjoyed working for this selfish arrogant oppressing asshole? How, why? And how could this professionally educated predator be so gullible as to let himself be tied up from the very beginning, especially given that even the asshole was surprised by the husband's ready agreement to fuck his wife?

And how about some physiology and sexual neurology. The guy is being raped in the ass, and he has an orgasm? If you think there's a button inside there somewhere that all you have to do is rub on and you get immediate sexual response then I guess you understand why so many men queers are promiscuous.

And the gun thing was really stupid. Unless they are prepared to shoot him to death, he goes to the hospital with a gunshot wound and evidence of anal rape and who do you think the police and DA are going to believe? They invited him into their house, tied him up, raped him, and shot him. I'm thinking they end up being the ones really fucked.

So again, I sympathize with wanting to teach a tyrannical bullying sexual predator a lesson, but this was kind of ridiculous. Give it another shot with more reality and plausibility.

And thanks for the effort.

Very good

Love it when a asshole gets fucked over.

Cute story though a little short! This one sorta tweaked one of my fantasies that one of you Literoica authors extraordinaire would write a "Burn the Prick" story along the lines of the typical BTB genre so popular on Loving Wives. Greg didn't exactly get burned just a few minutes of humiliation.

Good fantasy well written as usual. Still looking for that hard core BTP story.

Cheers

SAGE

A handgun? In Oz? Great story, otherwise!!!

Very humorous.

Wheeeeeeee, a fun ride. Well, not for Greg, but he was such an asshole he practically begged to be pegged!

I saw the twist coming, but it was still a very entertaining read. Nicely done.

Be careful of what you ask for

Now that was worth the warning. Loved it.

Maybe another category for this one. I was slimy but so was Greg.

Nowhere to run to, Baby, nowhere to hide.

Also, not a good ending to whine about who did who and why. This story didn't seem adult enough. Too much of a space opera and not enough of a real story and we know very little of a plot

It is not Gay Male. It is not NonCon/Reluct. It is not really Group Sex. It is clearly not Romance. It sounds like it might be First Time, but we can’t be sure. And Sweetie is overpoweringly adventurous! Gotta be LW!

4*. only quibble is that there was little adjustment Hubby and Sweetie had to undertake in their marital relationship.

Great story very funny

Whoa. You made my day. This is just so beautifully written.

Thank you so very much.

5 stars

Could kind of see it coming, nevertheless you did a fine job of telling the tale and it was a very enjoyable read.

Great spin on a shitty situation

Again I liked it

4/5

the dick size shaming was also a bit gratuitous, and dislike the word "cuck" in any circumstance, but I like to support clever writing, especially in LW, where the trolls chew up everything, so I gave it a "5".

So funny I like it even though I think it was impossible for wife the insert that dildo with the dude lying on his back.

5/5 stars. for being funny

Great read and humorous. Lol

Ew

Best "cuck" story ever. Funny as hell and quite satisfying.

Great twist

Nice tale! Thanks for writing!

For some reason I imagined this happening to all the commentors that always cry cuck...

This was a humorous read and definitely should be the template used for all of the boss wants to fuck the wife stories.

Rotten bastard got his!

I did not expect the direction this story went in but was pleasantly surprised that it did. Great story!

Richly deserved, original!

Great lesson!

Lol that was so fucking funny!

The asshole got the sex he wanted, only instead of him fucking, he got fucked!

nice twist!

Fun

such amusement!! smart way to turn the tables.

I never thought I'd get to read a funny sex story. Great job!

I love this story, turn about is fair play😆. I hope he doesn't try that again or he might end up in a hole in the ground next time🤭

Dome before, but what the hell!

I guess the wife was Greg's Bull!

Thats funny!! I was trying to figure out the setup but I missed it this time

Great comedy...

@Legio_Patria_Nostra4 days ago

A handgun? In Oz? Great story, otherwise!!!

What, you think Auntie Em, didn't have a double barrel shotgun?

Quite a good fucking!

I LOVED this story! Really gratifying. Keep up the good work!

The bad guy always gets it in the end...

5 stars

Thanks...

****Her husband and her really let him have it in the END!!!! Good read. Thanks for sharing.

Maybe a little weak on the credibility but still very enjoyable with the prick getting his just deserts. Liked the twist.

Outstanding!

Outstanding, 5 star effort !

Why did she return from the bathroom naked?

She didn't want to be called a bitch? Then call her a cunt. It's what that useless hole is and should be referred to as.

Innovative and entertaining. Though as her hubby, I wouldn't have let her fuck her boss's ass while she's wearing skimpy lingerie and heels... That's just begging for an unexpected reaction - for his wife...

The best kind of loving wife.

Not a bad idea but the "doctor" character has been portrayed a bit too naïve/stupid and rather lowly. I understand that being veterinarian is not exactly being an Einstein but it is not a trailer park trash either. The veterinarians I know are serious and decent people. You tend to overdo your characters to the point that there is no subtlety at all.

The bastard got his...

Way to go, Max & Lois!

Five Stars.

Ah yes, this is a story I can enjoy. Love the wanna-be stud taking it up HIS ass since in the usual LovingWives stories it's hubby that gets "screwed". Nice change of pace .......

I overheard Abby my wife talking on the phone to a friend Jill. The things I heard I didn't like her boss was trying to have sex with her while threatening her about different things at work. What he didn't know was I already knew. My group of friends were tight and we watched out for each other. I had told them what I had heard. 3 said not to worry it's taken care of. That next night her boss was mugged. I knew different. With in a few weeks he transferred to another office in a different area.

Wise man - after this "thing" with the boss, it showed great wisdom in confirming who was doing who.

Thanks for the story!

Nice Burn the Boss....(Chuckle)...

Loved it!!!!

That was fun!

LOVE IT!

AH HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA

That was fucking GOLD!

5 stars all the way

Best cuck story ever.

Nice to see the boss “gets it in the end” so to speak!

last 2 lines, LOL

It's a disgusting story, but it did make me smile. He deserved what he got.

Brilliant :)

Twisted but funny.

Letting that piece of shit get his cum on his wife? Oh, hell no. And she needed to do more than apologize for touching that asshole's little dick, too. Fucked up. Close to amusing and funny, but too close to a line that no real marriage would want to even approach. Would have been far better to have some hooker come in to do the honors, after he was blindfolded and leave her out of it completely.

Unique reverse BTB. Dark and farcical.

Brilliant! I got a good chuckle out of that one.

I laughed and shook my head at Greggie cumming while he took it up the chute. Good one!

Brilliant, brilliant, brilliant, the best plot twist ever, very well done.

Loved it. Short & to the point. Great & funny ending ! 5-😊😊😊😊😊

Great twist!

Dark, twisted, and absolutely hilarious!!! 5 stars

I loved it. Nice plot twist. So Greg thought he was going to be doing the driving huh? Guess someone forgot to tell hin Lois was going to be doing the driving. :-)

Loved the ending. Good twist

@Anonymous, yes, she could have just quit, but they wanted to teach him a lesson.

[19.07.23]

I guess her boss didn't understand Sterling Archer's warning:

"Phrasing!"

11/10!!!!!