All Comments on 'Nuclear Family'

different is good

Amazing. Is it Halloween yet?

Great story, keep the chapters coming.

Loved it. Reminded me a lot of Robert Heinlein's book Farnham's Freehold. 5 stars.

Maybe not completed but another nice chapter would do. This is a really good story and I hate to have to say "not another unfiinished story that I like". That has been happening a lot.

Looking forward to part 2

Hope part2 is coming soon. Love this story. 5 stars easy wish i could give you more.

Great story. Can't wait for the rest

Loved the story. I’ve fantasized about living in some sci-fi futuristic enclosed environment. Speaking of which; because it is a climate controlled setting, there really is no need to wear clothes. Just live the nudist lifestyle. Fast forward 18-19 years. The second generation daughters will be ripe for breeding. Altho I’d be surprised if they don’t start earlier.

excellent

I think Rose was written to be less than 18.

This is hot, love it. Can’t wait for the next installment.

Loved the story, Just a couple of critiques. I wasn't able to overcome suspension of disbelief on two factors: number of supplies (for 100s) and the size of living accommodations (size of a large house + 3-4 additional levels. Got a little hung up on the numbers.

assuming: Average birth size is 2, each Woman births yearly(as mentioned as a desire), Ratio of births is 50:50 M/F, and Menopause at 40: You are looking at around 10000 people in the number by the time 50 years rolls around.

Put just a TAD more polish on the writing. The story content and its believability is well done. There were several places where a keen proof reader is required, just stuff the spell check wouldn't catch. "it's only HAVE wrong for us" I look forward to ingesting the coming installment.

Waiting for the next part!!!

I'm pretty sure Rose is a lot less than 18 in the author's head

Great fantasy! So much better if you let someone proofread your work. I know writers hate this comment, but it's what takes a A-level story (and this was) to an A++, over-the-moon composition. If you don't want a proofreader, then at least study plurals and possessives and how and when to use apostrophes (you don't know how right now, I promise) and proof for things like "overridden" (to override) vs "overwritten" (not really a word, but sort of implying to ink over something that's already written).

great story. don't do a significant time jump

the only thing I would have changed is the number of girls unrelated to him, like maybe pam and pat had a pair of twin girls as their best friends and they were over at their house for a sleepover, and maybe rose had a friend over too. also Debbie and Tiffany were having a

ez part with 2 or 3 other girls

Certainly different. Very well written. Some mistakes but nothing to distract to much. I'd be happy to finish now but will read part two. Many thanks..

I really enjoy post-apocalyptic stories. Thanks for sharing this story. Best of luck with writing the next chapter.

Great story overall, only issue is the scenes with Rose, the way she is written makes it pretty clear that she is under 18 and it's extremely uncomfortable and overall concerning

Westermarck effect.

I really like the story, but I do agree with latin1527, I would have selected more unrelated friends of the girls to be present (sleepover?) and maybe even 1 unrelated male. That or have medical science be so far advanced that genetics can be monitored/altered to prevent health problems from inbreeding. the last could be incorporated in part two.

still. 5 stars from me

A little distracted with some of your grammar, NOT A GRAMMAR POLICE, but it is distracting. Plural of sister is simple enough, as is possessive of sister is sister’s. Possessive of plural is apostrophe after the ‘s’ of plural. But, wevall can make do of making due. 😁. Still 4*

Why a time jump?

PLEASE keep writing this story! Found it to be a fun read.

Don't introduce another male

I hope not to see too long of a time, jump. Also, the whole 'make all the future children female' thing simply makes no sense. And I REALLY hope we don't actually have to see any father/daughter incest. Even as a fantasy, I find that kinda sick.

Also, 5'10" and a 160 pounds isn't very big at all.

Awesome. Can't wait for more. Incest and impregnation, nothing better!

When’s part two coming out before or after Halloween and maybe make it were the dad leaves the military base and heads to the bunker or even have another side of the story where he in the military bunker and he they only male on the military base bunker and he finally gets communication with his kids in the family bunker and he finds out he going to be a grandfather and maybe he tells them there going to have a few new siblings that are going to be auntie and uncle to his grandchildren

I want to parrot what someone else said, DON'T add another male, please. This is yet another great story, and a time jump sounds good, but I'd like to see more of the current harem age wise. Maybe some longer sections to build on the individual relationships, but honestly I'll likely enjoy anything you crank out.

Also, I don't know that I'll ever finish/publish, but this story has inspired me to write my own story. It's a bunker setting as well, but it's a slower burn with a man who begins to discover his sexuality in a bunker that only has female relatives after his father and uncle dies. I'm going for a "realistic" approach as well with reluctance being a big theme.

Hey friend, it is already Halloween, what happened with the update?

2 hours til end of Halloween. Where's the next chapter?

Waiting for the next chapter

If I remember correctly Halloween is in October

Just checking if we are going to have an update

When you said Halloween, did you mean halloween next year ?

I hope you don't do like, a twenty-year time jump, and if so, I really hope you don't do the whole father/daughter thing. I know it may seem weird complaining about a particular kind of incest, but the whole parent screwing child thing is just sickening to me.

I must've misread Christmas as Halloween

I’m completely confused I thought you said by Halloween of 2022 do you mean Halloween of next year I was constantly looking for the update on the day after Halloween

Anon... It's joever.... It's so, so, joever......

Just need to point out; there are several reasons why, in this case, you WOULDN'T want to make it so almost all the babies produced are female. Reason one being that there are simply far too few males as is. While it IS true that a society with almost all females and few males would have a BETTER chance of survival than one with almost all males and few females, neither is the safest makeup. Mostly because, if the few males die, you're screwed. And in a prolonged survival situation like this, you should expect to lose roughly a third of your number.

Another reason is population boom. This bunker has a very finite population capacity, and with almost all females, if no males die, there will be a a HUGE population explosion. Even doing the math in my head, at the rate you've set up, with the idea that Nolan will have to impregnate these women every year, along with his daughters (gross, btw), the bunker does not have REMOTELY the space and resources needed to sustain them until they can leave. Not even close.

Also, with only a few males (and possibly one, seeing as how you seem to be planning on it ONLY being Nolan) breeding many females, the complications of inbreeding will be much more pronounced than if it was 50/50 males and females.

The smartest thing Nolan and them could do is figure out how to stop the food with being dosed with that drug. Otherwise, this bunker is very much doomed.

Love the story. Can't wait for more!

I'd like to hear this story from either Stacy, Debbie or Tiffany's perspectives. Or maybe a chapter two that includes Debbie and Tiffany both developing a romantic relationship with Nolan, and not just a sexual relationship.

That is some highly toxic semen to immediately knock women unconsious like that.

5 stars. I hope you're writing more of this story.

Thanks

Great read and yes l definitely want to read more of this fantastic tale.

Scores 5/5

Looking forward to the next chapter!!

Brother/Sister incest, great!

Harem for Nolan, fantastic!

Narcotics use...ruined it. 😒

1/5 and I'm not going to return to the series.

Love this story, love the dynamic between Rose and Nolan and I hope you'll return to this story some day!

Also loved the feet stuff, it's quite rare that it gets mentioned in incest stories, but it's definitely a major turn on for me.

I loved how hot the story is! Any update on your progress with the sequel?

Question, do you mean Halloween this year because I thought we were supposed to be getting the update last Halloween or are you still working on the new chapters or have you decided to wait or not continue i really like the story and hope you are able to write more chapters

Love it so far. Pick up your pen and get going on the next chapter(s) . . . .

Halloween of what year? 2048?

don't do a significant time jump. just continue right where you left off

You really need a proofreader and an editor

Obviously, it's been a while... Hopefully, not another abandoned storyline... But, it has been a fairly long time since this post. Still, a 4 Star ⭐ effort.