All Comments on 'Nude Beach'

Let me be among the first of many to recommend a proofreader. I would also like to say that I liked the story and I encourage you to continue writing.

I loved the story, but not having punctuation made it difficult to read. Don't give up. I would like to read the story with Ginger.

I appreciate that some people have recommended that I get a proofreader and I totally agree but haven't had a single response to my multiple requests for one. If your able and willing, please contact me.

Thanks in advance.

If you don't get things like direct speech correct, it is simply terrible to read, no matter how good the storyline may be.

Let someone proof read, if you are not sure.