All Comments on 'Nude Beach Bride Ch. 08'
by sirhugs
- 14 Comments
Anonymousalmost 17 years agoNBB is one of the best serials around !
JRavenalmost 17 years agoI haven't been online much lately. Good to see another installment. Keep it going!
Jenny
Anonymousover 16 years agoThis continues to be one of the best series on Literotica, lets have a part 9 real soon
starfanover 13 years agoI really, really, really enjoyed this SUPER story. Thanks to the author.
Anonymousalmost 12 years agoNo suspence, no conflict, no emotion... Just endless description without a point.
Anonymousover 9 years agoI definitly want to read the chapter with Carla the slutty bridesmaid and the others....
louise_lloydabout 9 years agoThis is a hot series of stories. I love the change in Gaby in such a short period of time. Like others have said, additional chapters including Carla and Kevin would be exciting.
kitearesover 5 years agoHe was concerned about STDs and pregnancy in earlier chapters.
Both have had bareback sex and shared fluids orally, anally and vaginally with only 1 condom used. You do realise that STDs can be caught from oral sex? From a man fucking a woman?
Then suddenly there is talk of creampies before they leave the resort and on the plane home, I guess the person offering the creampie is new, at least to the husband as he didn't recognise his voice, but even so was invited in. What happened to the pregnancy?
Also is she crossing the line from mutual agreement to dictating what is happening? I would prefer the husband got control of his mouth and stopped blurting stuff out and also draw some red lines, especially with this new interloper - "sorry pal, we're having dinner, just the 2 of us." It would also give her cnut chance to calm down and let her think for a bit.
It's a shame because there have been little things in the last 3 chapters that have really taken away from what has and underneath still is, a fun romp.
kitearesover 5 years agoJust seen this seems to be an abandoned story, it hasn't been touched in over 10 years, despite submissions in the last year.
Bloody shame there are so many unfinished stories.
