All Comments on 'Nude Day at the Club'

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CDConeCDConealmost 4 years ago
Nice tale!

Good summer reading... Fits this contest, hope the writer has another one for the Summer contest! This could have fit there as well! Nice story!

G5902G5902almost 4 years ago
Fun summer time story.

Great story!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 4 years ago
Absolutely erotic and sexual

One of the best stories I have read in a long time. Sexual but not overly so. Love the play between staff and the other characters. Nothing to suggest any blackmail or overtly hard sex that hurts anyone. The story is for adults having a really nice time. I am giving it 5 stars because it is so lovingly written. Thank you for a really nice story.

DunkirkDunkirkalmost 4 years ago

Too bad sherry and he disn't work together again.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 4 years ago
Hoping for the next chapter

Great story! Would be awesome if there was a chapter 2 where Dave and Sherry do another party, but with them producing the special ingredient together as part of the entertainment.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 4 years ago
Ending rushed

Such an excellent story. Too bad both endings were rushed and forced. A proper ending would have warranted a 5. I preferred the second ending, but either could have been good.

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